All Comments on 'Satin Blues'

You have a way with words Satin Blue. Fantastic piece. Now i gotta see what other work you've done. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Very good start. I can’t wait to read the second chapter.

I love your style and, indeed, the way you started the story is really unique, here in Literotica.

Thank You for writing. Your work makes our life a better life.

It's a great start, I always check your profile to find the best, new stories and you have them.

I absolutely love the characters and the story so far. Like in many of your stories one really cares for the characters.

The only negative thing that comes to mind is that the text needs to be proof-read as there are quite a few errors and a few of the sentences are constructed confusingly long.

Billie i wouldnt mess around with Satin billie you taking on alot of trouble if i was you i would try to find another place to live but you got a good story when billie came downstairs i bet Satin was dominating the mayors wife tomake her do things for her.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga

This is a story that just about stands on its own, as "non-erotic" lit. The characters and emotions ring true. Still, the last little bit was a painfully enticing tease about things to come. I'd love to see the sexuality unfold between these two.

I love this story as far as it went, but it needs more! You can't leave it here. Please!!

UH UH.THIS AINT GONNA WORK..WE NEED MORE.

When do they get to fuck???

This is a great story. Please continue! Please!

you really need to continue this story its sooo good love it!!

Three pages and NO sex??? Good story but complete waste of time. Time I can never get back.

Ahhh! You got me again, I need to know what happens next! This is my favorite so far. I wanna see if Baby Girl can handle Satins instructions! I've been very good, please don't punish me by making me wait! ❤️

Part two please

Your story's are hot