All Comments on 'Satin Doll'

Total waste of time to write and read. Grow up?

-100 stars

ButterflyGal

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Forget the haters. You still do good work. Been seeing your grind here recently and I'm impressed. As for this story, you did better with the character build up, and the sprinkling of sex with the wife is excellent (he didnt just forget he was married all of a sudden). Again, a little rushed, kind of like a Reader's Digest erotica, but over all I appreciate the hard work.

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