All Comments on 'Satisfaction Ch. 02'

by Prizmatic

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BaribrotherBaribrotherover 17 years ago
Nice

Very nicely writen. I thought it was great. I read both of the stories. Sorry I didn't comment on the first one, but when you get hooked into a story you just want to read the next chapter.

Keep it going. I will read them all.

Baribrother

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very interesting

Enjoyed both chapters. Looking forward to some more.

SexyDoll143SexyDoll143over 17 years ago
Great!

This was a great follow up to the first chapter! Can't wait for more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More

I thought both stories were great, but I want more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
another

it seems we have another turkey writer that get us hooked then drops the story and moves on to another one what a waste

PrizmaticPrizmaticalmost 13 years agoAuthor

To all those who asked for more:

What can I tell you? The muse sings what she wants, when she wants. I can only go with the flow. Sorry to anyone who thinks I'm leaving you hanging, not my intention at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more

Please write more like its a good story but its pointless without finishing it right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
muse shmuse

your just lazy admit it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF

This is about the worst I have ever read,, I am not a writer and would be embarrassed to put some useless crud like this for anyone to read ,,

what a load of shit, f _ _ _ing awful

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Another rushed page. . fuck her virgin pussy in 5 minutes firstime and wants to eat it second time. dumbass wimp story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It was good, brother and sister fucking because it feels good and is convenient. Simple and easy!

The drama doesn’t get my Dick hard. Also, bitching about it being to quick? Give me a break, these kids just unleashed the most powerful feeling a human can feel. Later on they can simmer down and enjoy it.

Anonymous
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