All Comments on 'Saturday Morning Punishment Ch. 01'

I am so pleased that you posted one of your stories here finallylegal18. *smiling*

Your writing takes Me to a special place. I am immersed in being there in the story, your words make it so real to Me. So hot.

And, yes, I think it is publishable quality work with the exception of the typos, spelling, and punctuation errors. Proof your work better before posting please.

Example: "The flash of the camera brought her back to reality. SIR on his way to the office saw her sitting their and snapped a picture of her as she sat there deep in thought."

their/there

Thank you

Nathan

Perhaps the writer would like to proof read their own work for spelling and grammer.

The topic is good though and the story flows well.

I think the word you're looking for is 'grammar'.

Loved it. More would be nice.

YOUR STORY IS SO HOT. PLEASE WRITE MORE