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by OlderWiser1970

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Please continue

Great story! I think you could keep it going for a while. Let’s see how these 2 develop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Sorry, but...

She was really fairly slutish (even tho she was a virgin) for simply jumping into bed with the first thing that came along. I really doubt many virgins would do such a thing. Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You graduated high school in 1990 but started your freshman year of college in 1988? Consider getting an editor in 2021.

OlderWiser1970OlderWiser1970about 3 years agoAuthor

Dear anonymous assholes: I'm so sorry you found this story so difficult to masturbate to due to the "slutish" behavior and an editing inconsistency. Consider fucking off immediately.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's believable to me. Kris is on a mission to get laid

and sorta on the rebound. Then mix in her knowing

Tony and she sees as good guy: Game on!

madtowncunilinguistmadtowncunilinguist2 months ago

Thank you for taking the time to write this sweet little story. I enjoyed it and have read it a couple times now.

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It was time for a restart. Middle-aged guy who wrote his way through his lusty mid-life crisis. I think I'm past that now, but I'm still lusty and looking! ;) Any feedback is much appreciated.

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