by jessica_tang_vonharper
Great story continuation. Wish they would come faster and there was some kind of notification si I didn't miss a single chapter!
Jessica. You are an extraordinarily talented author. I love the way that your characters develop. Your stories are by far the most interesting and fun to read. Your mastery of the language shows that you love what you do. I look forward to more chapters.
Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapterr, i hope cody could fuck off and michelle would realize that glen & his friends are dicks so she could be with charlie and be mad at that shitty cody! I ship charlie and michelle so hardd i can't wait for them to be togetherr šš #fangirling
Jessica, I need to finish this story. If I have to wait another two months for this next installment, I'm going to follow you into the bathroom and punch you in the head before school.
<3, some person who is really into this story.
I am loving this! I love this story arch and where you are going with it. Thank you and hope to see more soon!
Another great chapter but much too short. Can't wait to read more.
Wonderful writing! I couldn't stop reading the series after I finished chapter 1! You have a talent for building up great scenes between Charlie and Michelle.
please don't keep us waiting like he waited between first & second michelle!
I love this story! Saturday night school is definitely my fav story on this website! I wish you could update asap and not taking months cause this chapter is really short :( but it is a great story tho! I hope you update more regularly! And i love to see michelle and charlie end up together š
Keep the character of Charlie honorable! ....Charlie walked up to Ronnie and took her face in his hands. "You and I go to prom together and we'll have tons of fun. We have a lunch date with Michelle to explain our relation to you"....
This is a fantastic chain story! Great writing, interesting characters and very sexy. I can't wait to read the next instalment. Please give Charlie and Michelle the happy ending they deserve!
Please keep this story going it's fantastic! I loved every word.
Please continue this story! I love your character development. You are so good at portraying and maintaining the different personalities throughout each chapter. Another great chapter to add to a well written story!
Are u alive? Plz say you are and don't die! I've been waiting for so long for the next part... Can't wait for it!
I've loved this story so far, with its exciting insights into feminine love, desire and exhibitionism - with a believable male character. Your narrative style is so clear and easy to follow that I can easily imagine myself in Charlie's place. So please, tell us what happens next!
The author has done a fine job capturing the highs and lows of high school. Really enjoying the chapters so far, and looking forward to the next one. Thanks.
So we'll done, it's almost like the writer has been there.
More please.
You are truly an exceptional writer to have created characters that feel real and that I have come to care about. PLEASE keep this story coming!
OOOHHH, I see the posts here are from over 2 yrs ago...so other readers have been here, but not posted any type of comments?? What a real shame that is, if it is true...
This series is a REAL SURPRISE to read...Jessica has spent a lot of her own emotional investment on this...I do not know how much 'reality' exists here, but I get the idea there is at least SOME!!
THANK YOU, JESSICA, FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!! You make me so excited to read the next chapter, waiting to see how Michelle and Charlie fare...where they take the relationship, in spite of, or despite, the interference of Cody and his thugs.
Ronni...she is a sweet girl, and I think this is gonna make her turn on Cody and the rest; Charlie is going to 'do right' by her, win her over...2nd girlfriend(?)...we will see how Michelle helps with this turn of events!!
Lunch will be an experience, also...high school kids...see how this goes!
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What an ending to that chapter! I thought Michelle was the third person he showed the photo. ". . . he could see the angry hurt in her eyes. She was holding her phone." Charlie and Michelle are in a heck of a fix. Can't wait to keep reading!