All Comments on 'Saturday Night Surprise'

You story, your universe, your fantasy. Why can't it be like this in real life?

Very well done! 5 *s

With all the twists and turns this ended up no where that I thought it would. I didn't really enjoy this and except for margo this is loving wife story? More like an erotic couples story.

And he was set up to be killed or possibly killed and he cries over the thought of losing them?

Way too many plot holes and unanswered questions. i.e. the wife is having a major affair, and suddenly doesn't seem to mind when the husband kills the lover. Oh wait, that was just after the husband appeared to have been setup by wife and lover(?) to himself be killed. He's okay with all of this?

As it turned out, not a good idea. This story was completely off the rails.

1 star

I kept waiting for him to wake up at the end, sweating and trying to figure out if it was a glorious sex dream, or a nightmare of staggering proportions! LOL

Not sure which of your stories was more confusing. I give up.

I like the idea of having two Women as much as the next Guy but this was so stupid. Where's the explanation on ANYTHING???

My mind may not recover from these two.😊😊

Yeah this one didn’t work either, not your finest hour.

You really need to explain things a bit more ... I was confused from start to finish.

Live in your world. May give me a heart attack, but sounds fun. 5

What can I say, no words describes this.

Not sure which of your stories i loved more. Keep it up

Lol, Dave. I can always count on you for an over the top (of the top) story. Thanks buddy.

Ok has your account been hacked? You are normally better than this

Who takes a shotgun to a hotel and how did the hotel become his magical home in the next paragraph? Somebody is doing mushrooms......

Would be quite entertaining if the consequences weren't so silly. Wish the characters were worked out a bit more (like a bit of background and who was the father of the kid he supposedly "dropped off" - BTW, what ever happened to him?).

Someone needs to contact FTDS on this one.

Smokepole

What if Rob is the father? Does anyone care?

So, the two whores were part of a plan to murder him, and the cops do nothing and the fucker is dumb enough to fall in love with them?

"Someone needs to contact FTDS on this one."

I understand that the creative half of the FTDS is dead

I didn't understand any of the motives or actions. And it wasn't worth the effort to try.

But thanks for your effort.

S t r a n g e !

Another load of crap.Why would he take a shotgun to an hotel and how did Viki know where he was.?

Thats just weird shit that made no sense. Back up the truck to the dump

Strange.

It’s so stupid…but it’s so tongue on in cheek it’s just fun! Who needs logic anyway?

I like the story a little. AAA+++

The ex lives there with his new girl, Margot. Your wife goes there to give him a five minute blowjob. So far, so good.

She forgot the baby bag? WTF?

And YOU hade a key?

Come on!

Does he get a price break when he orders two DNA tests at the same time?

It would be really good if just once CrazyDaveTrucker60 would write a story that didn't dribble off like a weak porn money shot

For some reason I feel like he's going to wake up dead.