All Comments on 'Satyrday Afternoon'

You know what? You deserve a 5*! You brought back bill Carter, who is one of my favourties! I am so glad to see Him and Polina! I am so Hyped! Also, I hope Owen learns to control the power over time! Phoebe sounds like an important character! Can't wait to read more! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

James

of racist bullshit you write. Seems NO standards are mandated here.

If anyone is enjoying this story and would like the anthology in full, you can find it on my website (alanachurch.com) under the title: "Satyr Day."

Dear Complaining Anonymous:

I have a username here myself ("nycreader"), but I don't want to take the time to sign in to answer you.

If my memory serves me from the past few hours, the only "racist" material in this installment is Owen's sister echoing her stupid boyfriend who doesn't want to have sex with her much (and whom she LEAVES).

I don't think this is a ringing endorsement of "racist bullsh[__]", Anonymous.

I hope that after you calm down and wake up, you *might* consider re-reading the installment.

E. in New York City (usually "nycreader" when Commenting here).

PS: If you're talking about the physical descriptions of Owen's mother and sister.... -- they're perhaps too stereotypical for you, but I don't think they are meant as racist.

(And Samara's having a higher sex drive than her jerk (now ex-) boyfriend isn't supposed to be an awful especially-Latina characteristic: it seems that *she* doesn't think so, and she thinks less of the jerk for his way of thinking.)

E./"nycreader".

A fun read and it is flowing nicely. I hope to see mom and his sister involved more soon.

I must admit, I'm struggling to figure out how the previous reader found it racist. I've enjoyed reading it (5*) and look forward to more. One small request, please don't have someone who says "I know all, but cannot tell you. You must figure it out on your own." or something like that. It's really a really overused cliché and a poor writing technique.

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This is five stars without a doubt. I enjoy the previous story connections you throw in. I thought that perhaps I had an inkling of where this tale was headed but I was way off which is a good thing since I would much rather be surprised. As far as someone claiming racism, it seems either they misread things or possibly they lack they lack the comprehension skill needed to understand but no matter since nobody else sees the readers hallucination. Keep up the excellent work.

Another great entry. Loved it!

Still going well.

Do you plan to tell the story of Bill and Polina?

The story is really good. AAAAAA+++++

WOW AND THANK YOU!!!! Would GLADLY GIVE YOU A 10!!!!!!!!!

As Oliver Twist said" More please, sir!"

Have a wonderful 2022

Paul

OMG Bill and Polina!!

Fab yarn love the premise and the new characters. Owen’s sister’s reason for getting shot of Charlie was quite right also.

After the "future-history-meets-2001" story, maybd i'm a bit sensitised ... but a guy named "Owen" whose dad was named "Gary"?

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=d0e9mcb1BEg