All Comments on 'Satyrday Morning Pt. 01'

Not sure how much I like Anaya, though I do kind of understand where she is coming from before the bracelet influence. That said, I really like the premise of it and I hope you take a nicer path when you explain the real power of the artifact rather than the more common domination path. Based on your other stories that I have read and enjoyed (a lot), I truly think this might turn out to be a Gem. Also, the Incest path is very intriguing, especially the vaguely mentioned sister who might be coming into the picture soon for the dinner. And who might be the mysterious woman, I am curious!

Can't wait to read more!

Reply to "James7594":

From the title of this series, the accent which sounds to Owen Balkan Slavic or Greek, the mention of "the God", and the allusion to the (attackers, or satyrs themselves?) moving as if on goats' feet, I take it that Phoebe has a connection to ancient Greek beliefs about satyrs. (I would look forward to her explaining this (and the bracelet) -- I hope, though -- in this series.)

"Glaze72": Nice (although I'm squeamish myself about incest) : I hope to see where you go with this (and if Owen decides to remove the bracelet at some point).

E. in New York City ("nycreader" when I speak up at Literotica (& one other similar site) ) .

PS: (after re-reading the conversation with Owen's sister) : I didn't realize that the bracelet may also have an effect via telephone connections: interesting (and I'm wondering if that would happen if Owen speaks to men (which would move the story in 1 or more different directions...) .

(Also, if this is to be a "Saga", maybe "Novels & Novellas" would be a better category??

E./"nycreader".

This is looking like a fantastic series, please don't stop. I think the incest twist could be spectacular and am curious if he will turn into a state of just have the side effects of a saytr,. Either way I'm very excited to see it.

Nice start. Your characters had a lot of... character! Never got boring. Great job.

Good start. While the ec classification worked out in the end I am concerned about the effect the bracelet is havng on his Mom and, possibly, sister. Hope he realises what it is and what it's causing so he can control it somehow. Like the way the characters are being developed. Looking forward to next chapter.

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I liked this alot! Fantastic start.

I like the story a lot. AAAAA+++++

Like your story. And even more because you don't eternally ramble about creamy white skin, sky blue eyes and strawberry blond locks. There's nothing wrong with those, btw, once in a while, but they're so ubiquitous on this site i'm totally fed up with 'em. Tx for having some (better) taste, IMO.