All Comments on 'Sauce for the Gander'

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NudeInMaineNudeInMaine4 months ago

Good story. I was expecting the wife to come back in the front door ten minutes after leaving and kick Emily out.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Betrayal means nothing to the weak.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Oh, no! For a reason, this slut Emily is sitting at the reception desk at a law firm. She so categorically and unequivocally outlined to Tyler the solution to his dilemma and her undisguised accessibility in this sexual equilibrium... Do any of you guys doubt that there are hundreds of such "dejected and upset cuckolds" like the current hubby in front of her table? And she needs to calm everyone down, sympathize, delve into, deeper, relax, empty the evil blue balls and take the hatred of bitter sperm inside her pussy. No, I don't like and I don't believe this "conservative, picky and friendly widow." And as for her low-key, modest and wide work clothes? So the fact is that it's easier to throw dust in your eyes, and if necessary, if you get dirty in the process of fucking, it's easy to pull off and quickly change to a spare one... Voila)))

Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl19574 months ago

Hope u hadas much fun writing this as I did reading it

maedhros21maedhros214 months ago

This almost makes it worth slogging through all the 750 word efforts that are a joke and almost all unfinished. Its nice to see someone take a story and build it so it has a clear beginning, middle and end. Thank you for the effort it takes to write a " whole story ". I also enjoyed your take on this trope 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Enjoyed the story but the husband, weighing his options, cut himself off in thinking of his future actions (throwing her out, divorce, etc.) One wonders why he'd do that as she didn't care about his feelings in saying, not requesting, her night with this asshole lawyer. Excuse me, but that seems to be reason enough to wonder her future actions & see where anything goes with Emily.

She says it won't happen again, but it shouldn't have happened like that (she saying it's happening over her husband's objections) in the 1st instance, & she promised her faithfulness at her wedding in the 2nd. Reconciling happened to fast for her on purpose cheat. It's been planned over 2 months, an emotional cheat arose before the hoped for physical one. You don't go back to normalcy that fast. There's also little, outside of the note to his job, about any recriminations he received from the husband.

Everything considered, I can't give this what should be at least a 4 star story more than 3. Bob

16GaDouble16GaDouble4 months ago

A cut above average, but a common theme for this category.

I didn't rate it as "average", but I didn't "love it", either.

Thanks for the time and effort you put into presenting your ideas.

The characters were quite believable.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ugh, it's a RAAC story🤢... please warn readers.. I would've skipped this had there been a warning.. first off the MC is glossing over very important details. Like his wife being attentive to him so she can butter him up... so she can fuck another man. She used sex to distract & placate him while she plotted and planned to have sex with another man. He thought they were getting their groove back. all while she had a selfish agenda. That's sick!.. second: he was literally BEGGING her not to go on this date.. she was so set on tarnishing their marriage, she wouldn't even consider it.. even when she knew/thought her husband will be fucking Emily.. sleeping with Stanley was wayyyyyyy more important.. I find this type of attitude disturbing & unhealthy for any relationship---- but especially a marriage.. she just had to do it, no matter the cost. That's petrifying.. 3rd how is this relationship supposedly go on without any sort of counseling or talking to find out WHY she would so casually fall for a seducer so easily?. She said she wasn't having an affair.. YES THE FUCK SHE WAS😒.. just because she hadn't fuck'd him YET, doesn't mean she hadn't crossed BOUNDARIES a married woman shouldn't cross.. her and Stanley had to have sat down and planned this "date" out.. she is sitting there making changes to her marriage with a 3rd party without her husband knowledge or consent.. she excluded her husband from detrimental information regarding HIS marriage.. was he there when she was falling in lust? Was he there when she was sneaking off to lunch dates with Stanley? Was he there when they set up a date to wine and fuck?.. if you can't do it in front of your spouse.. then what you're doing is WRONG.. if you hve to sneak and do it.. It's WRONG... she tried to manipulate him in to letting her turn their marriage into a JOKE.. which is basically what it is now... he cheated, she cheated.. it's a JOKE of a marriage.. open marriages are abominations.. I don't consider them "real marriages".. I'm just truly baffled as to how they can just kiss and makeup, go on as if nothing has happened after fucking different people?😕... That's just so weird and yucky to me. It absolutely doesn't matter her date was a dud🤷🏾‍♀️.. the fact that she did it is all that mattered.. instead of stooping down to her level.. he should've just divorced the dumb slut.. what was her consequence for her foolery?... Obviously she didn't care her husband fuck'd Emily.. she knew that was gonna happen and STILL left instead of snatching her husband away and telling Emily to keep her hands off her husband🙄.. what was her consequence?.. WHAT is to stop her from falling for another douche that whispered pretty little words to her?.. she had 1 bad experience... am I to believe she wouldn't want a re-do with someone else?😂😂😂😂😂... yeah right, as determined as she was to get her back blowned out?.. GTFO🙄... think the MC and the slut sorta deserve each other.. he's so wimpish😫... he legit said he would not divorce her.. despite the level of treachery she's dished out.. that's sad and pathetic.. him fucking Emily didn't make him any LESS sad, pathetic and wimpish🤭.. he's still a little bitch 😏

muskyboymuskyboy4 months ago

"There was no way I would divorce her. Regardless of her temporary insanity, I still loved the shit out of her." - cuck shit. She was a cheating whore that could not have cared less about her husband. She will cheat again IMO and he should have dumped her and never looked back.. She made the decision, not him.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

My EX never demanded a hall pass, she just sneaked around.

I was working in a job that demanded my presents during my shift which

was working evenings, Days and one midnight each and every week.

I admit I had got enough glues, hints but couldn't get facts for divorce.

It's a wonder I got a offer outside the marriage and accepted reluctantly.

I have read a high number of Loving wife stories, the one thing I have noticed is

It happens that the victim husband has or needs a lot of money / assets to win.

I have rated this story a 5 ; Thank god for Emily and amazingly Her Boss

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I have noticed that LW has readers that are divided into groups.

The BTB group, RAAC group, Revenge, consequences, Cuckold etc etc.

It seems when I read comments all groups are hard core single minded and near murder is the only resolve. It is easy to bend a green limb but one that is dried and brittle breaks more easily. I submit there is a lot of dried brittle victims reading these stories.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wonderful story. It's a shame Ty didn't go to the one who loved him-Emily. Too bad he didn't put a bun or two in her oven...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Your story has too many inconsistencies. You wrote the following:

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"He asked me if my husband would be agreeable--or could be made agreeable--to us being together for a day, a night or a weekend.

"I told him that I knew you were deeply in love with me, but I didn't know whether or not you would divorce me over a one-night stand. I didn't think so--especially if you knew that it was just a one-time interlude and it would never happen again... but I couldn't be certain."

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But then the husband says he is NOT AGREEABLE. In that case how can she go?

SwordWielderSwordWielder4 months ago

Very good. I disagree with the ending. Considering that the divorce rate > 50%, what she did permanently damaged their marriage. I think this deserves a 3rd ending - they get divorced and Ty gets together with Emily. That couple has a lot more potential, and Bree would have to see Emily's happy face every day to drive home the point of what she threw away. Ty doesn't have to be mean, he just has to say the marriage is over. Of course, then family will get involved. One last comment - there are a lot of single women older than 40; a nice single man that looks good and has a good job is going to be highly desired.

WetheNorthWetheNorth4 months ago

I do not believe in 'hating' anyone or anything. That is why I did not rate this story a 1.

But your story was just one cliché after another. There was nothing commendable about it.

Better luck next time.

Happily_Married87Happily_Married874 months ago

Enjoyed it very much one of if not your best story to date. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago
Well…

Writing was good but the endings were not. Neither BTB or RAC criteria for a good story were met. I hope you keep writing so your story line improves.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c14 months ago

Only answer is marriage is over. She will not respect him again and he will never trust her again. When only reason she increases frequency and passion of sex is to go sleep with another, well she was thinking about him the whole time.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A good story, well worth reading 5*. My personal opinion, Bree got of far too lightly. The office clearly knew how disrespectful she had become towards her husband for six months, with her tramp antics. I would have enforced a six month separation to let her experience what she kicked her husband to the curb for. "It was the most exciting night of lust and passion that I ever had with a woman......”. That comment alone needed at least six months of further experience of Emily by then MC to rub salt into the wounds of Emily. Just my opinion of course. :)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well done. I almost hoped for an exchange of marriage partners. 5*.

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggart4 months ago

4 stars. I think there could have been some more meat at the end dealing with the reconciliation but otherwise pretty decent. Wasn't really a revenge story, no BTB, and while it might be able to be called a RAAC it was possibly more for the wife then the husband, a story that can't be fitted neatly in Lit boxes. I just personally think there shouldn't have been either a reconciliation or RAAC with the sheer disrespect the wife showed consistently. First giving him extra attention to butter him up and then no matter what going on the date. She might have loved him but she clearly held no respect for him, loved herself more. If Emily wasn't still in love with her passed away husband I might have thought her and Ty would get together.

AethurAethur4 months ago

'Give him a choice, but without the option of having someone over to replace him in case he decides to step out on you. Make staying home with you so appealing that he will discard his date in favor of a special night with his wife.'

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The hubby tried that and it didn't work. But when wife does it, it does? While I enjoyed this story, it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. The hubby did absolutely everything (legally) possible to convince his wife to stay, and it wasn't enough. The fact that the wife admitted that she had feelings for her love: "He didn't care about me in the slightest. Not like I cared about him." As a married man, I can understand giving second chances, and being willing to 'fight' for the marriage. But what the wife did to her hubby was borderline unforgivable. The fact that hubby got a better one-time lover doesn't matter. That's just something for the readers to be more agreeable to reconciliation, which I'm not certain the wife deserves.

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Thanks for sharing the story. A solid 4.5*

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The writer deceives by being ready to bear betrayal,

because there is a price.

the Utopia without sediment is fake and impossible.

A burnt field remains.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story, turned out better for Th then it does in real life Usually does. But I feel Emily at least deserves 12 more return visits over next 12 months.

BlackHeart93BlackHeart934 months agoAuthor

If Ty had opted for divorce right away, there would not be a story to tell.

NorthHunterNorthHunter4 months ago

Fabulous story I really enjoyed it. I really like that Ty didn't become a doormat and made his own arrangement! Bree got a taste of her own medicine and had to realize that she will never again experience unsullied monogamy.

awyldsideawyldside4 months ago

Great story. But why is it? The husband always moves out? Why didn’t he take her stuff and throw it in the guestroom.

awyldsideawyldside4 months ago

Oh, and by the way, had he not found Emily I hope that he would’ve taken everything that his wife owned and toss it on the front lawn if she went out on that date. And then filed for divorce on Monday.

mattenwmattenw4 months ago

“There was no way I would divorce her” this sentence says it all.

And anyone who believes that a partnership can be what it once was after such a fiasco is a dreamer out of touch with reality. Without couples therapy, the two of them only have a chance in a fantasy story!

danbo56danbo564 months ago

Great story enjoyable read not more to add except for 5 stars well done

DeanofMeanDeanofMean3 months ago

Not convinced taking her back will work but wonderfully written an unusual twist likeable protagonist all the good shit

PoesproppiePoesproppie3 months ago

I like it.

Better than the usual baseball bat to the balls revenge.

His career is as fucked as the night of passion with Bree was.

Yes, the revenge sex was sweet and the sauce was liberally applied. I like it that like in real life, love conquers everything adversity included.

She has learned and he has the wife he now deems worthy. Whether it works in the future who knows?

Still a good 5 star read

FlamethrowFlamethrow3 months ago

A well-planned and executed reaction to his wife’s stupidity.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill693 months ago

Loved the story! Well written and could feel husbands pain and love for wife but my caveman would still visit Stan at lest once since all knew his plan. He would suffer!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I didn't like it, sorry. I really wanted to, but two wrongs don't make a right. They both adulterated (it means cheapened or made less pure) their marriage. They now are both scumbags. He should have given her the boot as she was leaving house, and made Emily the next potential Mrs. No trust anymore in the marriage. She'll just hide it next time.

fritz51fritz513 months ago

I could never make love to her again, regardless that I may well still be in love with her. If a wife said to me that "she wanted another man" - no actions on her part would be sufficient to take away the death blow that statement would have delivered. Never again would I be able to kiss her mouth without having visions of his dick in it. Go down on her? NFW, never period, there isn't enough douche on the planet.

This isn't some drunken mistake with a guilty spouse trying desperately to obtain forgiveness. For my money, the moment she asked, was the moment the marriage was over.

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

I loved the story. It was very plausible and extremely well-written. Those see relationships in a black and white way are reading too many simplistic BTB fantasy stories. This story successfully walked the fine line between fantasy and real life. The husband throughout "loved the shit" of his wife and those feelings infused everything he did.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

There is nothing that says "I'm a cuck only deserving of sloppy seconds", than begging a slut to stay with you. And dreading the thought of ever divorcing her. While she assertively and decisively shoots your pathetic attempts down and continues her quest for dick. All that "manly" posturing that followed is just a smokescreen to hide how pathetic he is. A proper ending would have us read the culmination of his cuck training by his wife, who now knows she can gaslight him to think he makes the decisions while feeding him strange cum. But the author actually thinks that poor, desperate cuck somehow won so we won't.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Interesting twist, snd I especially liked the meter rebuking good ole Stanley. That’s what a lady at bd ethical n mc astute lawyer would do. Granted. Not alot of those left anymore. However, the”non-fraternization role is thoroughly worn out, and based on an entirely erroneous legal premise, that is that third parties outside a firm or company can sue for its violation of the firm’s anti-frat policy. Bottom line, they Can’t, at least in any Anglo-American jurisdiction other than the Loving Wives Trope Republic.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit3 months ago

Interesting approach. In Ty’s position I’d certainly make it clear that she’d get no hall passes while he exercised his.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

There was no way I would divorce her.

=====> wtf? At least his attitude shifted later. Shexwas delusional. Contrary to the standard LW trope, spouses with the least amount of sexual history prior to marriage, are the most likely to be satisfied with their marital sex life for the longest period of time (statically speaking). The reverse is also true. Spouses with extensive sexual history prior to marriage become dissatisfied with their marital sex life the quickest. Still the opposite trope is persistent on the sort of stories. Go Figure. 5 stars for creativity and payback using Emily.

prato1992prato19923 months ago

Hagan lo que hagan nada será igual, nunca va a olvidar que ella lo cambió por sentir el pene de otro hombre y no le importo herir a su esposo. Es una relacion arruinada

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fiction requires a plot, a theme, which is based on characters and their actions and reactions. Part of that construction is assumptions upon which characters and events are based. Where these stories fall apart is creating these wives who act a certain way, sometimes for years, and they suddenly become these mind-numbed robots who lose all ability to reason, to think and to draw basic cause-and-effect conclusions. Going from Mary Tyler Moore to Children of the Corn in 2.3 seconds is illogical.

Ocker53Ocker533 months ago

Where are all the American men who have balls? It seems they don’t exist on literotica , no man with a backbone would put up with this wife shit, especially after he found out that it was common knowledge that she was running around behind his back⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Yet another badly concocted RAAC/Cuckold story from this author.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

What is it with the cheated on party being the one that moves out of the marital bedroom?

I certainly didn't when I found out.

Pussies.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Disappointing

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Even though I'm not completely happy with the ending I give this story five stars. It is well written and almost believable. Glad that Ty and Emily had a good time while Bree was miserable. Had to laugh at the law firms names, and who the F names their boy Stanly Wilbur? Bet he got picked on a lot growing up with that name. Maybe that's why he became a lawyer. The revenge on him would be kind of weak for most men but I'm guessing it may have ended or severely damaged his career.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The husband in this sordid tale of a wifes stupidity should exercise his wishes to date and have sex with other women very often and very public ally.

The wife deserves zero respect, just as she showed to him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A version of the spouse wanting to have sex with others with a bit of a novel solution of having his own date and overnight fun. I'm not really convinced this would work in real life nor a wife agreeing for his year of hall passes. But it was an enjoyable story which entertained but didn't thrill. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

What cruel, cruel revenge on the scumbag lawyer by a wimp husband. This story sucked so bad I'm going to spend even more money and time in anger therapy.

Chimo1961Chimo1961about 2 months ago

There is no way back from a situation like this, unless the husband has beaten the seducer. His whore if a wife needs to see he lover bleeding and crying to truly understand how her actions affect people. She needs to live with the image of what her boyfriend looked like afterwards. Only then can the husband claim his balls back from his disgusting foul whore

BlackHeart93BlackHeart93about 2 months agoAuthor

I love all of these comments. Thank you.

NitpicNitpicabout 1 month ago
Wrong

Wrong ending.Instead of trying to wine and dine his wife on the night of her date with Stanley,he should have started packing her clothes as she got ready and told her to take them and get out when she returned.Me, I don't see that situation with him and Emily ever happening.

Omart57Omart57about 1 month ago

I don't necessarily agree with the Mc's solution but I enjoyed the story! Still laughing over, Tom Dick and Harry, And Hughey Louie and Dewey! LoL!!!

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

I would prefer the wife to serve LONG TERM PENANCE, if the husband doesn't just kick her out and the scumbag lawyer to be put through an industrial meat grinder, feat first slowly of course.

desecrationdesecration21 days ago

The reconciliations and punishments strike me as unstable. If she wanted to seek partners outside the marriage, the marriage is not right, and the solution is escape.

prato1992prato199210 days ago

Me hubiera quedado con Émili, su esposa se cagó en él

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