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All Comments on 'Saucy Jack'

by Jen24

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Just in awe!

I like this story very much. The writing, the words, location, and characters. All first class.

A winner in my mind.

My best wishes

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent idea. Poor execution.

The idea was good and had a lot of potential.

But the actual story did not deliver. Neither a proper history, nor a proper story. And several typos and errors to boot.

- JT

kbatekbateover 17 years ago
Great Story Idea

Despite the mistakes, I voted 5 because I enjoyed some of the style used and some of the language.

well done.

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