All Comments on 'Sausages for the Slave Ch. 15'

Wow! Never saw that ending.

Really enjoyed your storytelling from beginning to ending.

Please keep writing!

You have a real talent.

Slavery is illegal. Even in your wacky assed world. Guantanamo prison isn’t a free for all, it’s a goddamn prison where lawyers, soldiers and every other fucking modern fucking convenience is.

Even in your whack ass world.

There is literary license and then there is bullshit spread so thick that it isn’t erotic or fun to read: it’s just annoying, like a fly buzzing around you while you’re trying to eat.

I just happened to see that you posted more chapters to this story. It became one of my favorites when I found it and since there were no updates for a few years, I thought it was complete. Thank you for posting the conclusion!

To Anonymous. Thanks for the favourable comment. The reason nothing happened to Sausages for the Slave for few years was that I had a go at writing up a back story called, with stunning originality, Sausages Backstory. Then I decided to bring the whole Sausages thing to a conclusion.

And thanks to the other Anonymous for your kind words.

As for Whackdoodle; you are my inspiration. Good luck.

I gave a good chuckle to this ending. At least the ridiculousness of it is better than forever slavery. Or at least funnier.

I really enjoyed the story. I’ve read it completely three times. I was a little disappointed with the ending as I was hoping Dan would actually get away and run into Mary after a few years and they could talk about what went wrong and how they ended up being where they are now. If your going to write any more stories I’d love to read Mary’s side of sausages.

Rickster, thanks for the comment. The story refused to lie down and die, so I rushed it towards the end. I was a bit of the same mind as yourself as I wrote ;the end.'. You tempt me to add an epilogue. After all, Dan has only arrived in Gitmo. He's still on the plane...