All Comments on 'Savannah 01'

I want to read about more of Amanda's fuck adventures. I want to hear about her cunt being filled with long, thick cock.

I think I'm going to enjoy this story of yours, and look forward to the next chapters.

I have enjoyed this fairly long first piece. I do not like the thought that it will be several weeks before the next portion. Hurry as much as you can.

Two of my favourite topics in one story and the main character has got big tits. I think I may have died and gone to heaven!

Great start Georgia, is there a Mister 1857? Can't wait for the next part; HURRY PLEASE

most pleasant surprise....a very nice read, its tone, pace and language fitting the subject well. I will look forward to reading the next and the next and next submissions.

Wildy attracted to southern belles so your stories are now on my radar. I would be thrilled to see more sympathy for the plantation way of life in future stories. It's enticing to read about spoiled brat southern belles and their bratty attitudes toward the slaves that have to serve them.

Very well written - dialogue and descriptions are superb.

Few minor typos.

Also, check the history - e.g., captains don't stand watches.

good story, and a very strong female character seems to fulfill the line from an old 30's show tune, "Who could ask for anything more?"

D

Madame, I am a Southerner, I am a writer, and I am particularly interested in the history of my region. Your writing style is very good but you need to use an editor for two purposes. First, your story contains some typographical errors; that is a problem which occurs easily, even for very good writers, and an editor can spot such errors quicker than can you. Secondly, you need an editor who is a Southerner because you cannot possibly write about the South in an accurate way if you were not born and raised in the South. Further, some of your history is inaccurate; e.g., Abraham Lincoln was not violently anti-slavery in 1860. You should read some of the dialogue from the 1858 Lincoln-Douglas debates to verify that point. However, I must say that the story is very well written and has been appreciated by a fellow writer.

Some of the minor criticisms may be accurate, but I prefer to focus on the wonderfully expansive tale and the extremely high quality of your writing. This is a wonderful first chapter. Well done.

Looking forward to the continuing life and times of our lady.

This story is abandoned after eleven chapters!!! 😡