All Comments on 'Savannah Ch. 02'

This is already becoming much better than beauty and the geek. Nice plot twist at the end of it.

I really enjoy your writing, beauty & the geek, we're screwed and savannah are some of the best stuff on lit! Keep it coming! ( I won't lie though, i'll be severely pissed if she marries douchbag cuz mommy says so)

i agree with the others this is alot better than beauty and the geek and i love the plot twist....

how will grace and chase deal with it?

can't wait to find out

It is hard to say if it is better than Beauty and the Geek because they were different story arcs. There wasn't a true Miley "ex" to deal with while there is that type character here. When this story goes 20 so episodes in, I'll say it is better or not. Otherwise, Keep up the always great work frozen. Can't wait to see where this goes

Savannah looks good, but is Beauty and the Geek finished? It would be really good to see that rounded off.

I like all three of your stories and look forward to the continuation of all three.

Please don't make us wait another 4 months!

While i love your work, all the stories ive read have been amazing, I must protest the over exaggeration of the southern accent. Being a southern boy born and raised I have to make this opinion known.

It's hard to convey certain things through the printed word, accents being one of them. Grace has a heavy southern drawl and I write her the way I do because I think it's sexy. Southern accents have always been my favorite. Rather than constantly remind the reader (as the narrator) that she's speaking with an accent, I've chosen this path. It will continue in future chapters.

I love these stories! all of your stories are great but i especially love Savannah

the accent is perfect! my fiance has that sexy southern accent but shes from Chicago. everyone accuses her of faking but its just the way she is. this story is ten times better because of the sexy accent you give Grace. SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

this is the best story on this site. please continue, i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story please please please do another chapter!

nice

waiting for next

Good dialog. Interesting characters. Romance. Even some hot sex. What's not to like.

I do hope it doesn't turn into a soap opera. Grace needs to fix things with Ashlee and not have some evil ex-friend plotting against them.

Looking forward to more!

You get Ch 3 on line LIKE NOW or this Yankee will be on you like white on rice...

This terrific stuff so far, I love it!

Im with him, get the next chapter out ASAP please! This story is great, keep up the good work

do more best story you've written

Oh lord. Why'd you have have to ruin a perfectly good story with idiocy like this?

MORE!!! This is great! Please give us more SOON!!!

I like all of them i want more

I loved this story. We need the next chapter.

keep up the good work I like the stories

Awesome story, but no chapter in two years...hopefully it is time to write some more!!!!!!

I just heard a good story circle the toilet bowl as it was flushed into the sewer...

"You've been promised in an arrangement of marriage with Dylan Montgomery."

Since it's the digital age, we're long past arraigned marriages.

please finish this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Simply amazing stories...plz finnish this. It has the stuff to become a great story just like beauty and the geek; or the sequel charlie and miley. I also love the way your plots run

The kind that I would like to keep reading. I kept thinking of the plain and direct talk the two of them had concerning, sex, friends, life. I wished I was as smart at eighteen. Then I realised you wrote this not eighteen year olds. If you don't finish this here, then I hope you wrote a book! Tell us the title or your pen name.

Thanks, you have earned my bookmark. Hard to live on that... *~*

I have to agree, this story just begs for more chapters. First love, giving up her virginity and then being told she has all but been promised to the boy she hates more than anyone as a way to save the family business. Of course you could write the story so that I would hate it, but this one really needs a happy ending. Maybe Chase will be the one to help right the families fortunes in some manner. Lots of ways to continue it..................

This storyline is quite nice. I love the plot details and the character development. I really hope you continue with this series so we can find out what happens now that she is arranged to be wed to the jerk.

And I'm in love with Grace. Who wouldn't be?

So now what does she do: her family or her love? A great little story. Bravo.