All Comments on 'Savannah Springs'

loved the story until the end, I am a sucker for a good HEA but this hopefully won't be a one chapter story. It was left too open. Please keep writing so this story could be finished properly.

I hope you continue this. I was a bit suspicious about the 3 days together scheduled regularly. What is this guy playing at?

PLEASE continue this story it is AMAZING!!!!

max sounds a bit too good to be true, we still have to hear who this new guy is all about, its a bit swoonsville but def get how much riley is into max, keep going

Please run the story through a grammar checker before posting. I think there are people on the site who volunteer to proofread and edit. I don’t know how they can be contacted, as I have never submitted a story.

I think your story lost impact and flow, because of those errors. The story idea is good, just a better exposition needed.