by lonie69
please do give us more. Five stars from me! I loved it.
Very sweet story and what a great start of your career on Literotica. I'll be looking forward for more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.
Very lovely story. Protection then confession of love makes for a gentle smile. That said, it could have been better with some editing. There were a few grammatical slips that I found distracting.
I fell in love with Lisa almost from the very first time her name was mentioned & as for Nathan all I can really say is "What a lucky bastard!!!" I would of loved to learn more about Lisa, her growing up & her adventures,. Then to follow the couple to their marriage & birth of the new member answering his parents dreams. Are there, may be any further plans for more adventures for Lisa, the family, Or of Charlie, as a new Lisa? Regardless thanks for a cool story
A wonderful uplifting story with a damsel in distress, a villain, a hero, and a happily ever after ending. Thank you for sharing your story. 5 stars!