All Comments on 'Saved by My Best Friend'

by lonie69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice

Ok not nice... I loved it. A good story and well told... Thankyou.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice

Verry nice

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
If this is your first story,

please do give us more. Five stars from me! I loved it.

KOTKKOTKover 14 years ago
Sweet

Very sweet story and what a great start of your career on Literotica. I'll be looking forward for more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sweet, sweet, sweet

Very good story, sweet and romantic. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sweet story

Very lovely story. Protection then confession of love makes for a gentle smile. That said, it could have been better with some editing. There were a few grammatical slips that I found distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Good story could use another chapter

damon67damon67over 8 years ago
Its a secret

I fell in love with Lisa almost from the very first time her name was mentioned & as for Nathan all I can really say is "What a lucky bastard!!!" I would of loved to learn more about Lisa, her growing up & her adventures,. Then to follow the couple to their marriage & birth of the new member answering his parents dreams. Are there, may be any further plans for more adventures for Lisa, the family, Or of Charlie, as a new Lisa? Regardless thanks for a cool story

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 3 years ago

A wonderful uplifting story with a damsel in distress, a villain, a hero, and a happily ever after ending. Thank you for sharing your story. 5 stars!

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