All Comments on 'Saving Kat's Life Pt. 01'

Well written Chapter, looking forward to the next installment. Good story pacing. Keeps the reader wanting more.

I’m looking forward to the next installment

Not too many authors are able to pull somebody into the story and feeling to stand besides the actors and feel their emotions as being the own. Looking forward for the next parts

Congrats on e very good story! I love your style and use if words. Can't wait for part two!

That was so very well written! I love the pacing and the characters. So excited to read the next chapters!

A very good start. A sort of slice of life story as it were. Please keep up the good work. Intimacy isn't always just about sex but, how people relate to one another.

Thank you for writing this story. it's very good - I enjoyed it immensely.

I don’t remember the last time a story pulled me in like that, so looking forward the the next chapter..

Please write the next part soon

Great writing, it's hard to believe that was your first story here. I thought it was as good as anything else I have read here. I look forward to the next part very much.

I love the way that the story reads. I really like the characters of Allan and the two girls. I can't wait to read the next chapter. My only critique is that I wish the you would describe the female characters more. I feel like their description is very vague. I gave you anx the story 5 stars.

Can't wait for more!!!

Very well thought out and written. Really looking forward to the sequel. Excellent.

Very enjoyable story. Shows that there are good people in the world and people willing to help. It also shows that age is just a number and the heart wants what it wants. Great job, can’t wait for the next installment.

Enjoyed the story and the building and interplay of emotions. Write the interplay of emotions and intimacy as a love story. There's plenty of fucking on thus site and it would be out of place to the mood set in this first part. Do a good job on part two. We are all waiting

For the read.

A big fat 5 star's from me on this your first chapter, hoping for more very soon!!

All we need now is for @Literotica to increase the amount of star's we can give to writer's that do a damn good job....

You are an amazing writer and I cannot wait to see more about Al, Kat.....and Angie???

Dear Author, Excellent first effort. Great story and great characters. Very well written

and believable since it is a work of fiction. Found it very enjoyable and quick paced.

Thank you for the entertainment. Keep up the good work. jntiques/John

I greatly enjoyed reading your first story. I am most intrigued as to which way this can go, especially with 'Butthead' still in the picture. The 2 young ladies also make this very interesting.

Good story - thanks. Please continue - there's a lot of potential. :)

Great start can't wait for more! Really hoping he's gets another chance at dax, and rips his arms off.

Your story line is good. Your dialogue sounds like real people, which is hard to do. My only concern is that the speed with the events are moving seems way too fast. To me it feels unrealistic that Kat could shift gears so quickly. Others may not agree but I can't see trust building so rapidly from either side. The two sides are so different that there has to be some suspicion about motive.

R.

Smokers are seriously unattractive and you ruin something by making the main characters automatically ugly and nasty smelling... Why would you make that kind of choice in a sex story?

Second, it could be me... But all the things you have them "laugh" about? Why, I think one time, it was funny. The rest was like the laugh tracks in old 90s sitcoms...