by JoeDreamer
Your story is one of the best I've read on Literotica!
It is not often that us readers can so closely relate to the characters in these stories. It was refreshing. Please continue the storyline with at least one more chapter.
It is a great story and writing.
Looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you
Hope we don't have to wait too long to learn just how Joe copes with the job and Bethany, well written and well thought out.
Peter
I've been reading through all your stories in alphabetical sequence. This is your best one yet - I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters.
Great plot, wonderful characterisation and perfect balance between the two. You tell a great yarn but have injected sufficient eroticism to spice it up....colour and contrast ! Compelling.
Looking at the comments, it’s hard to believe that for a story this great there have been so few comments on this pivotal chapter. Maybe readers are just too anxious to get to the next chapter it is so good?
there should be a 4 and 3/4 rating. Guess Joe's last act will be married CEO