All Comments on 'Saving the Ship Ch. 01'

Not a bad start but I'm not sure what you can add in Chapter 2, etc. Interesting story. I would have preferred more of a build-up/teasing prior to the big event. For example, having Vicki being caught by some of the crew members in her sexy teddy and heels or being seen by some as she got out of the ship's hot tub wearing just her little bikini.

blow the ship up,dump them out of airlock,poison their food,sell them as slaves,drug them and then dump them out of airlock,etc... save vicki for last...strand all of them on desolate planet

Lol, I was laughing the entire time. What a dumbass stuckup husband, deserved what he got for being so self-righteous that somehow his lust was more "pure" (a vague concept based on nothing but self-righteous pride) than all the other men aboard.

Didn't see the ending coming though, a nice little surprise.

This was a very interesting story, although I was a little bit dissappointed that the other human males got to have sex with Vicki, I would have preferred that only the huge-cocked alien get to satiate himself.

space condom if she could take the alien monster then he could have worn a space rubber.this is a dumb story

His isn't te best out there, but it's one of the most erotic. Shame that the author decided to give up on it