All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 06'

Really enjoying the story and characters. Just wish the chapters were longer.

Another great chapter!

5

Chapters too short. Makes it hard to follow and looses the flow of a great story.

Thanks for the feedback.

All chapters were submitted for publishing at the same time. This is the rate which the site is publishing them. As I don't have control over when the chapters appear, my only suggestion is wait several days and then read however many chapters have been published in that length of time.

The chapters only seem short, perhaps because of how long the "pages" are here on Literotica. If this story were published in a paperback, the chapters would be between 10 and 15 pages long, which is normal to a bit on the longish side for most books.

I wanted to tell the story from Rand and Hanna's first-person perspective. That meant switching perspective often so the reader could see the same event/situation from both Rand's and Hanna's perspective to make it more "their" story.

Finally, I didn't combine both Hanna and Rand's chapters together for publication because there are places in the story where the perspective doesn't change from Rand to Hanna, or vice-versa, and to follow the beats of the story, my chapter lengths would have been all over the place... from one page to in places 5 or 6... and I like my chapters to be (more or less) the same length.

Good stuff 5/5