All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 29'

Please stop pushing out such short glimpses, its really detracting from the story. Though sadly the story now also is dragging badly

I have to agree, the story is starting to drag a bit...Like a TV show that goes on a couple seasons beyond where it could/should have ended. Maybe it's time to wrap things up.

I don't give a 5 star rating to a story with such short chapters. Even though I am enjoying this, having to recap where we left off yesterday is becoming monotonous. I wouldn't want you to change your intended story line at this point, but in future stories I hope you give us a little more at a time. Great story, though. Thank you for contributing.