by SanityCheck
Thank god for that. I’ve stuck with it but at times in the series I had lost the will to live.
Now and then it dragged just a little, but the story kept me interested. A five-star effort!
For a 50 year old VW you get good money and it shows your skill with old engine. A new car everone can buy. But Oldtimer restore you must be skilled.
Jesus I was hating how this was moving so slow, but somehow keeping me trapped at the same time. The way that it hitched into high gear in these last parts made it like a good action movie. This was absolutely amazing writing. I don’t think I’ve ever read a longer story on this site other than maybe your other series, Protected. The concepts you come up with are astonishing and both this series and Protected kept me in a trance through the entire reading. I’ve never seen someone do a story like you where you show 2 different views from 2 different characters so you know what both are thinking. Amazing idea. I can’t wait for you to write a new story. I’ll probably be your first reader on it.
Awesome story....while I struggled with the number of chapters it was well paced and kept me engrossed. I so wanted to skip ahead but was afraid I'd miss something important. Well Done!!!
Nice one, well done.
Should have had more details on Carls demise and can’t see Alex taking defeat so easily without other payback