All Comments on 'Savitri Comes to Stay with Ravi'

More people should share their special love.

Dear kamukpen, it always feels great to read an indian story and there is a great plot working up in yours. So congratulations for your effort first. But there seems you haven't edited your work. And as a result, there are a few spelling mistakes etc. Why don't you edit your stories through the editor board of Literotica... so that it will make a nice read.. All the best for all your future endeavors..

Continue & add other characters also with fetishism.

It was hot and sexy to see the brewing Romance between the 2. Also loved the way in which he handled her emotions and secret love. Make her marry him by putting vermillion in the hair parting and then make her pregnant with a child. The taut tension and the way he would handle the situation would be an excellent hot as hell read. It would be so exciting to see his wife playing and caring for the child.

Nice story