All Comments on 'Scales like Stars Pt. 01'

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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 6 years ago

Why did he get the man turned into a woman?

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
Read between the lines!

The answer as to why is there in the story, but it will be spelled out more explicitly at a later date ^-^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Cool!

This is starting out nicely!

Please continue!

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
I plan too! ^-^

The next story will be up next week!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Misspelling

It's "Kuiper Belt" not "Kupiter Belt".

StaukerStaukeralmost 6 years ago
Wtf is this?

On a one to ten scale, the amount of sense this story makes is about a three.

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I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great start

"a middle aged black man that he had never met in his life" - this made me laugh so hard!

FirestromFirestromalmost 6 years ago
Best Story I've Read in Weeks

This is fantastic! So original, and absolutely delightful. I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't fuck with Truman! Ha! Classic.

member9458member9458about 5 years ago
Outstanding start

I love how aware you are of the tropes you're playing with and your ability to craft some solid jokes from them, as well as your characters and situation. There's a sense, even this early on, that you're taking these characters seriously even as you're having fun with the story; it's very Martian Successor Naidesco and I'm here for it.

Descriptions for later chapters suggest this story gets batshit in ways that might be a little too much (for me personally, this is not really a criticism), but I'm VERY curious to see how you get there and how these twists are handled. Consider me hooked; can’t wait to read more!

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