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I'm sure that you and your harem are having a ton of fun in writing this, loaded with all the in-jokes that you find funny. But it's making less and less sense to the rest of us as it proceeds.

I know that i said the same shit on patreon already, but it is seriously getting harder and harder to stay invested in your work. Either the story derails totally or and this happens usually when the lore is actually interesting gets killed by you way to early and abruptly.

I am sorry that you feel that way about my stories and that you aren't enjoying them as much anymore. I always strive to improve and I do hope you will find my future works more enjoyable. Either way, thank you for reading and I wish you well,

Though, as a note, I haven't received any criticism or complaints on my Patreon, so if you have sent me some there, I haven't gotten it!

i like it just wish the chapters were longer and brash is the bomb

I have, for the most part, enjoyed this series so far. There are a lot of references that I get and appreciate (like the bit with the exploding runes which I have to assume was a reference to OOTS, the Shrike joke, Thuwit, etc), but other people might not be as familiar with any of it so it might not make sense. The only thing that I've really had trouble making sense of is Granny. She seems to be there to provide exposition for the setting and to provide a bad guy for the chapter. The problem with using her for exposition is that she loses all her credibility once her identity comes up, and, as a character, her motives for doing anything in this chapter are completely unclear and unexplained.

Loving this series, those too stupid to follow the story don't deserve what you write anyway.

Having Merton pull out a Green lantern version of Captain America in the last Chapter had me laughing as I imagined the howls of horror from the DC vs. Marvel zealots.

Loving this series keep it up!

But I won't ignore the comment section. Critiques are important, after all!

Though, if you DO have a complaint, be more like Anon #3 and give actual details to your critique.

Also, Anon #3, Granny wasn't actually the antagonist of that chapter. Her guilty conscience created the fortress and the "guardians" within to keep her trapped. Sorry if that wasn't entirely clear.

Hey hey,

The story is very funny, especially with Brash.

I do not understand most references though.

Would you kindly (reference bioshock) name some references during or at the end of the story? I'm not such knowledgable on these matters.

Greetings

I so love this story....

i love the story and the characters. specially Brash and Merton

I hate politics in tales, it always comes off as snarky and arrogant. Ignoring that I love it, thanks for sharing.

This one is much better than the initial three. You still rush through what little character development you do, and the story is rushed as well. You could really turn this into a whole series or maybe even a book or five if you slowed down and took your time. Still. Beautifully done. A fantastic story, and very well written. Very few mistakes that I could see.

I hope you enjoy all the chapters just as much!

I like this! It's been like picking up a good quick read, and getting to know peeps better as we go along. Saga on!