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The crowd supporting her resisted any attempts she made to cover herself. Any time she tried, her wrists would be pulled back down and her legs spread. In addition to the hands that supported her weight as she was lifted into the air, others began to grope and explore her bare, defenseless body with increasing insistence. They kneaded her breasts and stroked her already sensitive nipples. Others groped her ass, and more than one made its way between her legs. Her reluctance and shame began to melt away, as the throbbing that had been building in her loins was brought dangerously close to a crescendo by the probing and grasping fingers. She moaned as they worked faster and faster, pinching her nipples, plunging deep into her pussy, tickling her asshole, and stroking her clit. The avalanche of sensations left no room for rational thought.
Before she could stop herself, she let out a powerful moan as crashing waves of orgasm washed over her. The crowd cheered at this response and the hands intensified. The sensations were becoming too much, and Kelsey squirmed in discomfort. She was rescued by a familiar voice that cut through the noise.
"Take her to the lake to wash all this soap off!" The voice belonged to the cute boy that had showed concern for Kelsey. He could tell that things were getting a little too wild and was doing his best to defuse the situation, but the crowd seemed too preoccupied to listen. He had apparently managed to salvage his shorts during his tumble down the tower, but after looking into Kelsey's glazed, overstimulated eyes, he took a deep breath and slid them off. He waved them over his head, now just as nude as Kelsey was, and shouted, "WHO WANTS TO GO SKINNY DIPPING!?"
This managed to reach the crowd, and people began to follow suit. First a few of the rowdier, more adventurous boys dropped their shorts and began sprinting towards the lake. One of the girls helping to support Kelsey looked at her and said, "I can't let you be the only cool girl at camp!" She promptly undid her bra, to spill forth her ample chest, and before she could think better of it, dropped her shorts and panties, making no effort to cover her cleanly shaven pussy. This seemed to be the tipping point for the crowd, and soon everyone was in some state of undress and headed for the lake. Now that Kelsey's nudity had lost its novelty, she was carried to the lake and playfully tossed in, to join the rest of the campers already splashing and laughing.
She swam over to a familiar face close to shore. "I really appreciate what you did for me back there," she whispered in his ear, reaching out beneath the surface of the water to grip his still hard cock. "And I told you I'd make it up to you." They shared a smile as her hand began to stroke.
- COMMENTS
Probus888over 1 year agoThat was well written and realistic (I guess). It was good to get her emotions and feelings.
Cyberweasel89over 2 years agoWow. I've been writing erotica for over 15 years and I can honestly say, for a first attempt at online posting? That was amazing. It was a perfect blend of "easy ENF stripping" and "grounded internal logic," it avoided a lot of the common toxicity of the kink, it was wonderfully wholesome, it had a happy ending, you properly Categorized and Tagged it (seriously, thank you), and your descriptions of Kelsey's appearance, emotions, and motivations meant that I really empathized with her and wanted to see her succeed. And since ENF is an emotion-based fetish, empathizing with the character enhances the ENF exponentially!
That human tower part also expertly built suspense, with JUST the right pacing so that it doesn't overstay its welcome. You also utilized a little-used element in ENF stories that I will always try to push more of: Allies. I don't know who that cute boy was, but he's exactly what I mean when I say putting "allies" in ENF stories. He might not have been able to directly save Kelsey, but he was able to give her a light in the darkness. Plus, call me a romantic, but I'm a sucker for those guys who'll treat me with a gentle touch like a knight does his damsel. It was also brilliant on your part how his gentle concern wasn't working, so he went for refuge in audacity by going SKINNY DIPPING! Aw, just *chef's kiss*
I honestly think that this would be a great set up for a series of Kelsey's continued summer at camp and her new reputation, infamy, and budding relationships with her fellow campers and the counselors (the first girl who stripped to head to the lake, for example, sounds like she has some potential for expanded characterization). Of course, I understand that your muse determines where you go, so what direction you take your bright future career in is entirely up to you. But the fact you put so much thought and care into this story and it has so much depth, it's a REALLY impressive thing that it has so much fodder for a series.
Superb job! I'm gonna be sharing this with my friends off Literotica, and that is NOT something I do often. <3
