All Comments on 'Scared'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

Nice character development and interaction. Thanks

Janice1939Janice1939over 12 years ago
Great start

One is never to old or young to learn acceptance of self. This is like a coming out story, but needs a few more chapters of acceptance and enjoying what comes natural and is normal. Still a good read.

L.O.L. Janice

the_woods_the_woods_over 12 years ago

Very interesting character development, I agree with the coming out comment. Great look into "testing the waters" hehe

catman71catman71over 12 years ago
i do hope there is more

the first two pages where great,and the explosion/implosion at janes families house should be very interesting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Small bit of confusion

OK, you imply heavily that Elena had at least the beginnings of a sexual relationship with her redheaded junior high school friend, which the other girl’s mother objected to. But you refer to the mother in question as Sister Agnes, which screams “nun,” so I’m a bit confused. Are there non catholic denominations which refer to “sisters” that are NOT nuns?

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