All Comments on 'Scarlet'

I loved it. You should do a sequel and have them marry and start a family. I know if you do, it would be just as great as this one was. Great job :)

3 stars.

In just two pages, you drew us into a story of sharing, belonging, that others cannot present in even ten pages. Thank you.

This is a very good start to what could be a great romance story. But where do they go from here? They haven’t finished college yet and their schools are a thousand miles apart. Long distance relationship? Those are tough, at best. I’d like to see more to the story, I think there is more to be told. Someone told me once, probably an English teacher, that when writing a story, just as in boxing or baseball, the follow through is as important as the windup. I believe it.