by secretme
That is a very dark, and disturbing piece of prose. I can only hope that as the time passed between now and when you wrote it, you were able to exorcise whatever prompted you to feel like this. It is very nicely done from a technical stand point. Graphic and moving.
Extremely well written catching the invisible scars and pain that people can not see from the outside. I hope the writing of this exorcised some of the demons.