by cumcouple
I love this story so much. The way you write is just amazing, it's so detailed and clear but never overbearing. I wish I could write scenes like this the way you do!
Ch. 01 was good– kept up my interest enough to read this, Ch. 02; I'll now go back and leave four stars for it (Ch. 01).
If you're still around here I WANT TO READ MORE. Keep them real-ish. Each new chapter does not, should not, have to raise the bar on what Mel does, is done to her, her feelings and emotional state, her arousal level, who participated, how good that participant was/performed, etc.
I am positive that I'm not alone in this desire for more....!
Please continue with this story! So hot and I’d love to see how things progress