All Comments on 'School Daze'

Sweet story! I don't mind the occasional spelling error, but I cracked up at "petty buglers" ! And he can't "palpitate" her tits! (Palpate!) A lot of fun, but if it's going to be a romance between a writer and an English teacher, PROOFREAD!

A very quaint and lovely short story. Thank you!

This is one of those stories that either begs for a longer version, or a sequel. It does satisfy purely on its own, doesn't require any more than what it is; the characters are so lovely that I want to continue living in their world! Excellent work. I do agree with the anonymous poster who commented on the need to proofread. Especially this story, with an English teacher and an author as protagonists.

Loved reading your very sexy story. I admired their developing love story. too bad he is shaved -- I thought he would have a dusting of body hair -- chest, abs, thighs, maybe forearms -- a very sexy sight. Glad they ended up together!

An interesting plot, well-described characters, very good dialogue both internal and external, locations succinctly presented, a nice sense of humor, a great sex scene, and an unexpected birth. An excellent love story.

Good story, really enjoyed it 👍

Nice story, interesting dialog but the typos are distracting.

Nice plot but using their names in each and every sentence became very annoying for me. It lost it's natural feel. People don't talk like that, taking each others name in every sentence. And even outside the conversations you kept using their names instead of pronouns.

One would think that by the time a person types out almost 200 pieces to publish they would understand the importance of writing properly.

I can understand though. It's a hard thing to do when you don't recognize good writing.

I did see the irony in it though. Someone who fancies themselves to be a writer makes the main character someone who also professes to be a writer. Now that's funny.