by neuroparenthetical
A very nice dom/sub story with hypnosis. Loved the interaction between Jenny and Mistress Vivienne, it was very hot and erotic. The lactation element also was a nice addition to the story and definitely increased the sexiness/deviance level.
If you are open to suggestions:
1) Mistress Vivienne continues to ‘train’ Jenny for her college life. She attaches breast-pumps to Jenny’s chest until she induces lactation.
2)After inducing lactation to Jenny Vivienne informs her that her initiation phase is over and she has to get her nutrition back from her youthful breasts. Jenny gets her breasts drained regularly, remarking how hungrily Vivienne sucks her boobs dry (to the point they drop a cup and look saggy). She comments on the nursing process and how her milk has made Vivienne stronger and sexier, while both wear lingerie.
3) Vivienne introduces Jenny to her roommate. They have lesbian sex, where Jenny gets her milk sucked out of her via breastfeeding and later on used as lube.
4) A lesbian threesome with dual breastfeeding.
Very unique dreamy sub narrative. Liked the mystery of what was going on at the beginning. Maybe find new ways to make us guess.
Excellent tale. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Loved the way you introduced your characters and plot. Five stars.
PP