All Comments on 'School Principal Dominated by Bully'

Amazing work

This is so unrealistic, tawdry and total nonsense, for any story to be of worth there has to be a certain degree of realism in it. No redeeming qualities whatsoever.

Principal loses job, husband and home in less than 4 hours... and goes directly to prison for 15 to life. Guess why? And author is banned from writing.

Principal no more. Wife no more. Off to the gutter.

4-stars

You’re telling us that a 21 year old man is in a high school with 14 year olds and that him fucking kids is acceptable because he’s in high school?

You clearly have no fucking clue about schools and policies. He wouldn’t be allowed in school, he would have to do online learning, ESPECIALLY, since he has criminal convictions.

But let’s pretend for a moment he was a student:

This man, who has no respect for the law, would avoid fucking some 14 year old because the law forbids it? He want us to believe that he would prefer some middle aged pussy over a virgins? Or that he wouldn’t start pimping the teenage girls out?

GODDAMMIT! I hate stories that test readers line they’re imbeciles.

Go peddle your bullshit somewhere else.

Nice that you love MILF whores, but let me tell you, a MILF certainly wouldn't love you! That takes class and you certainly don't have it!

One Star

BTB and the thugs

Disgustingly weak.

Quit

Unless he knows about it.

The next day people were fired and the rest were in jail. Beyond stupid story.

1 star

I have to laugh when someone wrotes something like this with the idea that it should exist. I'd rather have herpes or listen to Marlboroman cry and whine through one of his stories, than try and keep todays lunch down that this story is bringing up.

What do say about this story. A lot of people have said it already. Don’t get me wrong the idea was there it has the hallmark of being a great story. But the story was all over the place. The story needs tidying up it also needs to be placed in the nonConsent category or the bdsm category. The story needs help with how it works the story was not thought through look you have got the idea you just need to pull the story change a couple of items put it in the bdsm or the nonConsent category’s and just look at the likes you get . Do not get me wrong there isn’t much wrong with the story but to get the right effect put it in the correct category ok .

....mmmm... stupid, not believable *

Short, fun story. I don't think it was intended to be War and Peace. People are complaining about realism. It's just a scenario, calm down.

With that said, I would have clarified the 21 year old in high school thing. I would have said something like the school was some kind of rehabilitation facility for young adults or something.

Every guys dream of fucking an older , a woman in a power position, a hot mom or a married woman. It doesn’t happen often but I does happen and when it does the sex is usually off the charts . One story a friend was out in a bar and saw another friends mom out with her friends all a little drunk having a good time . He joked and flirted with them all night then offered her a ride as he lived down the block . He said he told her as soon as they got in his car he was going to fuck her and kissed her before she could even respond. He put her hand on his cock and when right for her pussy, she was wearing thin Cotten thighs. He had so many videos fucking her . At least once or twice a week . He always talks abusively dirty while fucking her snd does the most perverse things with her. I wouldn’t believe if I didn’t see the videos. This happily married mom to three kids we know well taking it up her ass and rimming her kids friend. He tried for the longest to get her into a dp but she didn’t want anyone else to know so he told her all the videos he took he showed everyone he knew . She was mortified,embarrassed and afraid her kids would find out . He told her he would delete all and tell everyone he digitally put her head on in the video if she did one dp and he would bring someone who wasn’t from around there. She agreed and they met at a motel about an hour away . He guy was a few years older but big and black and know he didn’t have a massive cock. They piped pills and fucked her for three hours. They even pissed on her in the shower . Apparently that was the last time she was disgusted with herself and started seeing a doc but this shit does go on

But...there's so much more that could happen! I know that there's a certain novelty to letting the readers' imaginations run wild and filling in the blanks with their own fantasies, but this can be sooo much better and longer! Sequel, please?!

I mean, Kyle is a bully and we haven't even gotten to see him bully the pathetic cuck yet! Not even subtly, like, by say, spurting his junk in a meal the wife prepared for the cuck and then having the wife invite him over for a family meal so they can watch the cuck eat it with smirks on their faces as they finger each other under the table to Mr. Oblivious. Stuff like that.

More please!

All the clowns Ringling Brothers laid off are now trying to write stories for LWs, and failing epically.

Great, Loved it..

Please continue if possible

You should make a part 2 to the muscle man alpha story.

I don't know why your stories get such low ratings. They should all be five stars. People just rate things based on if it's their kink or not which makes no sense. You have an amazing feel for the bully dynamic and all the variety that comes with it. I was so happy to see you write a new story after such a long hiatus. I hope you continue. Please, include more antics by the bullies and humiliating of the cuck, both subtle and blatant.

I love the being of the story i wish you put a little more the ending

Kills the story and it should have a more submissive part for female and

It should have more with the bully i really love the start of it

I'm not going to be too critical of a short spank story. In fact pretty decent premise. I like the too-submissive-to-object, too-turned-on-to-resist then gets trapped theme. However, you pushed it a bit far a bit quick. Other people should be a bit later. After he's trained her a bit. And she should get turned on and maybe lose herself in the moment, but she should be resistant and ashamed when not in his presence. Maybe she gets wet when 5thinking of it. Maybe she can't stop watching the video clip. Maybe she begins to associate being turned on with the feelings of shame she gets at the same time. But she should never just happily go along with it.

What a SUPER STUPID STORY

nice write more

What's really disgusting to know that some people actually favored this piece of trash. But then there are a lot of reader's in this category that crawled out of a smelly sewer. Isn't that right "wendy53"?

What's really disgusting to know that some people actually dared to critise this piece. But then there are a lot of reader's in this category that crawled out of a smelly sewer. Isn't that right "Anon"?