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"Well, don't leave me waiting," Scoopz laughed. "How wet is this bitch,"
I had an orgasm the second Mike's thumb touched the edge of my wet pussy lips.
"Holy fucking shit," Mike said to Scoopz. "Dawg, this shit is going down NOW."
This angry thug put his hand under my chin and forced me to look up at him. Mike was just as much of an alpha male as Kyle was, perhaps more so. I had just met him and knew nothing about him. The absolute worst decision I could have made was to be sandwiched between two white thugs during school hours in my office. And yet, here I was with Mike's big thumb in my mouth. I looked him right in the eye and sucked it. When he slid his thumb out of my mouth, it made a popping sound. I could feel Scoopz taking off my skirt while Mike distracted me. I was so focused on Mike thumb. It tasted salty, and it was so thick. If his thumb was that big, how huge must his cock be?
Scoopz pushed my head down until I was at eye level with Mike's crotch. He swiftly yanked down his jogging pants, grabbed the back of my head and smothered my face in his boxer briefs. I could smell the sweat from his balls.
Mike twirled my hair so that it was a handle he could use to guide my head. This was obviously something he had done many times. Once again, the pressure of doing a good job for another white thug overwhelmed me. When Mike released his monster cock from his underwear, it smacked me in the face. I was salivating, and his dick was throbbing. Like a real man, he hadn't shaved his pubic hair, and a masculine scent emitted from this bush. He was just as thick and long as Kyle. His balls were the size of small oranges, proportional to the beer can cock he so smugly rubbed all over my face. I could hear a belt being undone and a zipper being pulled down behind me. And at that very moment, someone knocked on my door. It was my husband again.
"Honey, you in there?" I could hear him say. "You're not answering your phone, I thought I'd surprise you for lunch again."
This made the boys laugh, which my husband surely heard.
"So, what's it gonna be, bitch?" Scoopz asked me. "You want us to leave? Or do you want us to make your husband leave instead?
And just like that, I orgasmed without touching myself.
END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWhat's really disgusting to know that some people actually dared to critise this piece. But then there are a lot of reader's in this category that crawled out of a smelly sewer. Isn't that right "Anon"?
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWhat's really disgusting to know that some people actually favored this piece of trash. But then there are a lot of reader's in this category that crawled out of a smelly sewer. Isn't that right "wendy53"?
satedandwaitingover 3 years agoI'm not going to be too critical of a short spank story. In fact pretty decent premise. I like the too-submissive-to-object, too-turned-on-to-resist then gets trapped theme. However, you pushed it a bit far a bit quick. Other people should be a bit later. After he's trained her a bit. And she should get turned on and maybe lose herself in the moment, but she should be resistant and ashamed when not in his presence. Maybe she gets wet when 5thinking of it. Maybe she can't stop watching the video clip. Maybe she begins to associate being turned on with the feelings of shame she gets at the same time. But she should never just happily go along with it.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI love the being of the story i wish you put a little more the ending
Kills the story and it should have a more submissive part for female and
It should have more with the bully i really love the start of it
Anonymousover 3 years agoI don't know why your stories get such low ratings. They should all be five stars. People just rate things based on if it's their kink or not which makes no sense. You have an amazing feel for the bully dynamic and all the variety that comes with it. I was so happy to see you write a new story after such a long hiatus. I hope you continue. Please, include more antics by the bullies and humiliating of the cuck, both subtle and blatant.
26thNCover 3 years agoAll the clowns Ringling Brothers laid off are now trying to write stories for LWs, and failing epically.
Anonymousover 3 years agoBut...there's so much more that could happen! I know that there's a certain novelty to letting the readers' imaginations run wild and filling in the blanks with their own fantasies, but this can be sooo much better and longer! Sequel, please?!
I mean, Kyle is a bully and we haven't even gotten to see him bully the pathetic cuck yet! Not even subtly, like, by say, spurting his junk in a meal the wife prepared for the cuck and then having the wife invite him over for a family meal so they can watch the cuck eat it with smirks on their faces as they finger each other under the table to Mr. Oblivious. Stuff like that.
More please!
Anonymousover 3 years agoEvery guys dream of fucking an older , a woman in a power position, a hot mom or a married woman. It doesn’t happen often but I does happen and when it does the sex is usually off the charts . One story a friend was out in a bar and saw another friends mom out with her friends all a little drunk having a good time . He joked and flirted with them all night then offered her a ride as he lived down the block . He said he told her as soon as they got in his car he was going to fuck her and kissed her before she could even respond. He put her hand on his cock and when right for her pussy, she was wearing thin Cotten thighs. He had so many videos fucking her . At least once or twice a week . He always talks abusively dirty while fucking her snd does the most perverse things with her. I wouldn’t believe if I didn’t see the videos. This happily married mom to three kids we know well taking it up her ass and rimming her kids friend. He tried for the longest to get her into a dp but she didn’t want anyone else to know so he told her all the videos he took he showed everyone he knew . She was mortified,embarrassed and afraid her kids would find out . He told her he would delete all and tell everyone he digitally put her head on in the video if she did one dp and he would bring someone who wasn’t from around there. She agreed and they met at a motel about an hour away . He guy was a few years older but big and black and know he didn’t have a massive cock. They piped pills and fucked her for three hours. They even pissed on her in the shower . Apparently that was the last time she was disgusted with herself and started seeing a doc but this shit does go on
Anonymousover 3 years agoShort, fun story. I don't think it was intended to be War and Peace. People are complaining about realism. It's just a scenario, calm down.
With that said, I would have clarified the 21 year old in high school thing. I would have said something like the school was some kind of rehabilitation facility for young adults or something.
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhat do say about this story. A lot of people have said it already. Don’t get me wrong the idea was there it has the hallmark of being a great story. But the story was all over the place. The story needs tidying up it also needs to be placed in the nonConsent category or the bdsm category. The story needs help with how it works the story was not thought through look you have got the idea you just need to pull the story change a couple of items put it in the bdsm or the nonConsent category’s and just look at the likes you get . Do not get me wrong there isn’t much wrong with the story but to get the right effect put it in the correct category ok .
