by Bungaku
This was a well written story and has the makings of a spell-binding series. Can't wait to see if you write a sequel
Great story, not sure if it totally belongs in mind control, though.
Thank you all for your kind words!
I didn't plan on making this a series when I wrote it. All your kind comments have started to sway me, however. I can confirm a sequel is in the works -- though I don't know where I'd take the characters after prom night. Stay tuned!