by Codlingsby
Your writing is very high quality and you have achieved a good balance of narrative and erotic action. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters.
Bob A.
First off, great story. Secondly, anyone who leaves their comment in the atrocious short hand used for texting has no business commenting on anyone's spelling or grammar.
This touches all my buttons, The idea of the teacher being dommed is a favourite of mine (as a teacher myself), and you do it to perfection.
OMFG ~ This is so hot! I could easily picture myself as the teacher and/or the new girl in play. I look forward to reading the rest of the story!
Well, yes it has been a long time for this story to be on this site. I really like that there are clear lines of demarcation between the pupil and teacher. Too often the lines are blurred and the Domme takes the slavery too far. I imagine that there are some limits and a safeword that has been agreed? Hope to enjoy the rest of the chapters.