by krystalite
You've already excited enough would be rapist with this tale.
"Xinmin" ~ Please ignore the impotent previous poster, and continue your BEAUTIFUL story :)
The build-up was a bit uneven and the sex itself was handled too quickly, but the basic conception is a good one. You should definitely write another chapter.
left. She was not forced to have sex nor to drink alcohol. Thereby she submitted to her seduction altho he did use a pretense for force in saying he would should her photos. She remained in the bed, carried out intercourse, and had unprotected sex. She is a slut and like may girls in the movie industry she bought whatever role she gets with her sex. So be it, after all a girl who has sex for a job or money is a prostitute, she may become a star but she will always be a whore.
Excellant first attempt. Perhaps you may include some futher storyline like..being forced to seduce a dirty old man or a foreign construction worker. Being asked to wear sexy clothes in public etc. There are so many ideas to debase the charater. Looking forward to your stories !
I loved this and I want to follow up with this story.
he was just beautiful--
he wanted to watch art lesbian movies with me--
he liked to see the women touching each other--
it didn't really affect me (his attitude toward these women), but his attitude for these women did--
the idea that he would get so excited by the art lesbian movies (we were in Tucson--me in poetry, him in philosophy/law)--
he thought i had "lesbian tendencies," so--
it was a little hot that this fantasy of his--
i used to be ashamed--
i was raped by a butch--
i could have switched to be one of my--captors, rapists--
i didn't, never will