All Comments on 'Schoolgirl Gets Ravished To Act'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Continue?? PLEASE DON'T

You've already excited enough would be rapist with this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Continue? ~ PLEASE DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Xinmin" ~ Please ignore the impotent previous poster, and continue your BEAUTIFUL story :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Not perfect, but do continue

The build-up was a bit uneven and the sex itself was handled too quickly, but the basic conception is a good one. You should definitely write another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
The girl was overage and at any point could have

left. She was not forced to have sex nor to drink alcohol. Thereby she submitted to her seduction altho he did use a pretense for force in saying he would should her photos. She remained in the bed, carried out intercourse, and had unprotected sex. She is a slut and like may girls in the movie industry she bought whatever role she gets with her sex. So be it, after all a girl who has sex for a job or money is a prostitute, she may become a star but she will always be a whore.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very Good!

Excellant first attempt. Perhaps you may include some futher storyline like..being forced to seduce a dirty old man or a foreign construction worker. Being asked to wear sexy clothes in public etc. There are so many ideas to debase the charater. Looking forward to your stories !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Please continue!!!!!

I loved this and I want to follow up with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Boring

Very boring.No desicription.More fucking in the story pls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More please

More please. Moar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I think very femme sexy--

Don't hate me if i'm sexist--

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I want to be ******

by a dirty old man

(or a hot math major--just kidding)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
He was a young math student who

he was just beautiful--

he wanted to watch art lesbian movies with me--

he liked to see the women touching each other--

it didn't really affect me (his attitude toward these women), but his attitude for these women did--

the idea that he would get so excited by the art lesbian movies (we were in Tucson--me in poetry, him in philosophy/law)--

he thought i had "lesbian tendencies," so--

it was a little hot that this fantasy of his--

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i'm a femme

i used to be ashamed--

i was raped by a butch--

i could have switched to be one of my--captors, rapists--

i didn't, never will

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