All Comments on 'Schoolgirl Uniform; Jenny Ch. 02'

I want my dad to do this to me so bad. My friend Kylie has been teasing my dad all summer and then three weeks ago he gave in and fucked her. Now it’s all I think about. I need to figure out how I can do it. Maybe I’ll invite Kylie over to spend the night when my mom goes back to Wisconsin for Christmas. Mmmmmm

Nice, nasty fucking. Well done!

Sad to see it end but a perfect place to stop. Great job! *****

Is the story finished ? I see much potential still

I really enjoyed this story, but you *really* have to stop using/overusing the word "embers".

Hell with her ass. He should pump his cum in her cunt and leave her with a baby bump

Loved this story! Please continue it!!

I grew tired of the continued use of OOH! OH! No, no, no, no! I am sure that you could use other words to convey the meaning. This bordered on smut porn. We were told she was close to cumming but very little about the climax she was dealing with. With very little experience with her climax, these had to be earth-shattering. She was just raped by her animal father. So now she will think all lovemaking has to be a brutal attack.

Oh please daddy

Give me more. You made me so wet.

Write another chapter.

Please Daddy I want that hard dick

What a delicious tale of a daughters 'punishment' and the erotica that came of it. I do agree that your characters vocabulary needs to expand but I realize in stories like this sometimes the oohhs and aahhs really are best. I look forward to chapter 3 and seeing how their new 'relationship' progresses ~ thank you!

Daddy, I need another chapter, I need to know how the story goes. I need to feel your cum deep inside me, your seed being planted into my ever longing embers. I need to feel your seed blossom deep inside me. Please one more chapter!

This series was hot! I loved everything except for one element of the writing style. The constant use of ellipsis was really distracting. Majority of them could have been commas. Otherwise it was great :)

Your stories and themes are hot, the writing and build up is pretty good, but the constant mention of “embers” and everything surrounding that description is too much. It’s distracting from the story. I noticed it in every story of yours I’ve read so far. With that being said, obviously I’m still reading your stuff. Just find other ways to describe the desire building in your characters and don’t mention it every couple paragraphs.

Interesting read though needs a part 3 to finish it so we see how it ends up.

Very good indeed. What happens next? Jenny deserves a good seeing to lets see what they get up to next ?.

I surprisingly enjoyed this story a little bit. I don't really like rough play/the name calling in particular, but this story was still kinda hot. The only thing that I don't like is that there was no aftercare, i also didn't really like the little bit of slut shaming from the dad in between the times they fucked. but all in all still a hot story well done

This story really deserves more chapters.

More please, she will develop.

Outstanding in every wsy

Wish there were more parts to this story. Does Daddy continue to use poor confused Jenny? Does he even have a conversation about tge changes taking place in their relationship? Does he let her know that he and the principal has decent she would be free use in school? Hmmm...the possibilities