All Comments on 'Schoolgirls in Lust'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Same Story Twice?

When I was reading this I thought I was reading the same story again as your other contribution about the two foster sisters! Just a different title mainly.

Janice1939Janice1939over 13 years ago
Explaining how we feel

Writing down the same event, coming into one's first relationship reads for everyone else as one of the same. Putting personal feelings in a story can make one feel free. Both read like a grab for being oneself and freedom.

LOL Janice

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Yum

Ooh sexy slut

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
suspicion

i suspect ",,,jane" is really a male. Not a well-written story.

redskinsfan6969redskinsfan6969about 9 years ago
Great story

Can't wait to read what happens between these 2 sexy teen girls

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Technically the Nightingale effect in foster care form. This could have been more interesting had the characters been developed in better detail.

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