Scout's Oath

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And Jeannie had been very popular.

It only took a minute or so for her to feel him thicken, then harden, until she couldn't readily take more than half his length. She shuddered when she felt his hand on her head, and braced herself to have that big cock shoved against the back of her throat.

But all he did was brush her hair back for a better view, and caress her cheek.

She looked into his eyes, and saw his need for her. It made her heart beat faster. He was as hard as he was going to get. She set up a steady rhythm, head bobbing smoothly, then extended one arm toward him, hand open.

He looked confused, until she pointed at the condom beside him, and opened her hand again. He rushed to place it in her hand, and groaned when she sat up, halting that delightful mouth from doing its chosen duty.

She smiled, and gave him a wink, tearing open the condom. She didn't have much experience with these, but she did her best. It didn't take her long to have him covered. "How do you want me?" she asked.

"Would you ride me for a while? Let me see you, watch you?"

"You know you're going to have to teach me, and be patient with me." She straddled his hips, hesitating, perched above his hard cock.

"Just sit down on it, and do whatever feels good."

That sounded like a plan, and she soon had that full, stretched feeling, resting on his hips. She moved up and down a little, then scooted back and forth, loving the feeling of that. She placed her hands on his chest, moving her hips, wiggling them, rocking them.

Alex watched her face, loving the way she was experimenting, learning what she liked. He'd grin when she found something good, and repeated it. She was obviously enjoying herself, testing, trying, and occasionally looking up at him before attempting something new. It was good to be playful, but this was only an interlude. He knew what she needed, even if she didn't.

When he saw her tiring, he reached for her shoulders. "Come, lie on top of me."

Jeannie stretched out over him, and her lips settled over his. When their mouths parted, he nibbled on her lower lip. "Having fun?"

She smiled big, and wiggled her hips, "What do you think?"

"I think you are amazing." He pulled her legs in, adjusting them, then lifted her hips. She followed along willingly. "I need to fuck you a while," he whispered. He put one arm around her shoulders, holding her in place. The other hand grabbed a handful of her perfect ass, and held her steady, while he started driving his cock up into her. It only took a few seconds to find the right height and angle. He felt her teeth nibbling on his shoulder, and he nipped hers, making her whimper sweetly. He grabbed her ass in both hands and pounded her, non-stop, hard and steady, feeling her body respond.

It was tiring, keeping the fast pace going, but he maintained it until he heard the sweet sounds he was looking for. The time spent between her legs, orally pleasuring her, had taught him her responses.

But this wasn't how he would finish her. They needed more intimacy this time. To offset the demanding rough fucking he'd broken her in with. The first one was to get her body to respond, to instinctively accept being taken. This one was for her heart.

He clutched her tightly to his body, and turned with her, placing her beneath him. He kissed her face, easing in and out of her, long slow strokes, once again ending with that little grind. He shifted his hips, entering her from different angles, listening and feeling for her responses.

When her body told him she was close, he rose up on his elbows, gazing into her pretty, trusting face. "Do you feel what you do to me?" he whispered.

She nodded, reaching up to touch his face.

"You were made for me," he said, kissing her softly, tenderly, his cock now moving slowly, in and out, steady. He groaned, and gave her a dozen or so fast hard strokes, then returned to the steady loving.

"You're mine now," he said. "Just like I am yours. You. Are. Mine." He emphasized the last three words with hard, deep strokes, grinding into her at the end. Her little whimper and nod had him smiling.

"Say it, Jeannie. Tell me."

"I'm yours," she gasped, arching underneath him. He hadn't expected the words to set off her orgasm, she hadn't seemed that close, but he adapted, holding her tightly, pounding into her, extending her climax as she clung to him. "Yours, yours," she moaned.

When it passed, he eased up on her, continuing the slow steady loving. Kissing her face, brushing away the few tears, nibbling on her neck, her ears.

"Don't hurt me, Alex," she whispered.

"Never."

* * *

Hours later, they had showered together, and returned to the bed. Jeannie was on her side, leaning against his prone body, her hand toying with his cock again. He felt her giggle.

"Never laugh when handling a man's pride and joy," he teased.

She kissed his chest. "Please. Like you don't have the confidence to know exactly what this guy can do to a girl." She gave it a shake. "It seems so cute and harmless, like this."

"The poor guy's worn out. You're insatiable, you know."

"Is he happy?"

"Ecstatic."

"Are you?" she asked, the words a little more tentative.

"Doubly so. I'm living a dream; don't wake me."

She climbed on top of him, kissing his face. Pressing her lips against his, she tried to convey all her feelings through that kiss.

"Thank you," she whispered. "Thank you for making my first time perfect."

He smiled, and gave her butt cheeks a squeeze. "It was purely selfish, you know."

"No, I don't know. There was nothing selfish in what you did. I was nervous and scared, and you made it wonderful."

"Wrong. It was totally selfish. I wanted to make sure that you loved sex, if at all possible. I was hoping that by making it good for you, you'd want to do it a lot more. With me."

She laughed, and kissed him again. "I guess you succeeded." She sighed and lay down on his chest, feeling his breathing, enjoying the touch of his hands on her body.

"Tell me I'm not just another notch on your bedpost," she whispered.

She felt the big sigh, and immediately felt guilty for voicing her fear. "Do you think that's who I am?" he said.

"No, not really," she answered, kissing his warm flesh. "It's just a little scary for me. You've been with a lot of women. I've heard the rumors. I know you could have anyone you wanted, probably. Heather is yours for the asking, the girl's in love with you. Why me?"

"I don't know. Sure, you were cute, adorable really, trying to cover up that fabulous body, all upset. All I wanted to do was help you. Even when it was over, and you asked me if I wanted to have sex with you, I did, but I didn't think much of it. I wasn't infatuated or anything. You were just a pretty girl who needed help, and I was glad I was there to provide it."

"When did that change?"

"Oh, that's easy. When you walked into the Gamma house, wearing only panties and a bra, and that stupid huge grin. That's when I knew you were something special. The following weeks only confirmed that feeling."

"Well, I'm glad they did."

"How about you?" Alex asked.

"I knew I wanted you the moment you stripped naked and stuck out your hand for me to take. But the closer was when I asked you if you wanted to have sex with me. You kissed me, and I could feel how bad you wanted me, your big thing poking me in the belly. And you still said no. You lied to me; you wanted me bad. But you did it for me. I knew then that I wanted you to be my first. Within a week, I was convinced you would not only be my first, but you'd be my only, if I had anything to do with it."

Jeannie giggled and scrambled down the bed, sucked his cock into her mouth, and delighting in the groan she heard. "Jeannie," he whispered.

She loved the sound of her name on his lips. She sucked and stroked, and was relentless, until several minutes later he was firm in her mouth. She sat up and grinned. "Ready to be my fifth?"

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Thank you for reading my contest entry. I'd appreciate it if you voted, and/or left a comment to let me know what you think. And please read the other contest entries, there are some great ones this time around. - TTT

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texlootexloo5 days ago

That was a good solid read! Well done author!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

So good. I love this story. Would have been even better if she had turned out to be HIS first!

MardracMardrac4 months ago

Need more Alex stories

fishkoppfishkoppabout 1 year ago
The last scout?

Thank you very much for sharing your Alex Hamilton stories! I love them, and would love to read more of them!

blackknight314blackknight314about 1 year ago

Cute & sexy & funny. Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

socaltzrsocaltzrover 2 years ago

Alex Hamilton is absolutely my favorite character on literotica. He is the man I strove to be at that age. Thank you for writing stories with good and selfless people in them and not just the selfish or fake martyr characters common to the genre.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well worth the read

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Time for some more Alex stories

Come on TX. You know we love you. 4 years missing between the comping trip and Jeannie. Please, please.

PS and thank you.

mjef2mjef2almost 6 years ago
More

Just like Alex; Head, Shoulders AND Mohican above the norm.

Thanks

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11over 6 years ago
Even better than "The Last......

Superb writing

I read The Last several months ago but missed the Sequel.

Thank you for making my evening

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
RE: SCOUT'S OATH

Thank you for presenting a story outside the box. The beginning with Jeannie and Alex meeting was rare and so very chivalrous in an age where it has gone by the wayside. We need more men like Alex in all age groups. Thank you again for a great read.B

LupusDeiLupusDeialmost 7 years ago
Very nice, but something amiss

After thinking a bit I decided that Alex Hamilton character is wasted on this story, although I see how he was the inspiration. Changing nothing but his name would make it even better for me, a random guy with never explained reputation. We, who have read the Last Boy Scout would recognise him as Alex cameo in disguise, and get a great grin, but it would remind unforced it was him. And/Or even more commitment to the girl's pov would be nice, not necessarily first person with full dive in inner monologue, but more exclusivity; yes, I didn't like how the sex scene switch to Alex pov almost entirely, after we followed the girl in over-the-shoulder mode for the most of the story. He never could, except if she told him her story; that even might have been nice way to from this too.

And, a nitpicking, but who is Lisa? It seems author never decided himself was she the Lisa from Last Scout, what doesn't really stick or makes it a bit weird, or is she just another girl that happens to have the same name. That's happening in life all the time, but is a bit confusing for the reader.

It is also not explained how our girl protagonist knows Heather's high school ex BF, a single sentence reference that he is, I don't know, a cousin or brother's friend, or whatever, would make the web of relations so much thicker.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the read very much.

AcerxboxAcerxboxalmost 7 years ago
Agreed with Anon. What happened in between?

Have to agree with Anonymous' The Last Boy Scout vs Scout's Oath. What happened in between? You gave so much depth in TLBS hell I'd had hoped to read more about Alex Hamilton. When I saw Scout's Oath I was more than ecstatic to read it but left me wondering what happened after the camping trip. I hate assuming but is Heather the same character from TLBS? The same girl Teri shared a tent (over sized matchbox) with all her 20lbs. of makeup? What happened to Miss Shannon Ryan, the Samuelson sisters, Lisa and Julie? Alex's best friend Teri and his fellow scout John with pecs like slabs of concrete? Did they hit it off or did Dominique get with Alex? Too many questions I am sorry. It's just you gave The Last Boy Scout such a life of its own it was hard to read that Scout's Oath is a stand alone story with your main protagonist being the character I've come to admire. Being a veteran of Iraq and Afghanistan wars I use to read your stories as an escape. Hope you continue the Alex Hamilton character.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The way it's supposed to be!

Alex must be an Eagle with palms. Very well done! Maybe the best story I've read here!😋😁👏

jimgray27jimgray27about 7 years ago
Greek life??

Penn State may have just started giving the death penalty to the greeks by banning rushing for the immediate future. 4/5/2017

No loss.

Subject matter and the way it's approached does influence my appreciation of literature.

WE ARE

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleabout 7 years ago
Who needs all those other guys . . .

. . . like Captain America, Superman, Batman, Spiderman, and all, when we've got Alex Hamilton? Thank you, TTT, for giving us a super hero of our very own!

Hans

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
So very good!

A well written and wonderful story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Scouts Oath vs The Last Boy Scout

LOVED The Last Boy Scout (TLBS) as it was longer and covered the story in much detail, introducing Alex Hamilton and the cast of characters, eventually giving their history and interactions together. Great story from start to history to finish.

Scouts Oath (SO) is so much shorter than TLBS, used only one character from TLBS, so any knowledge of previous characters is gone. (Unless Heather is Heather from TLBS, it's not made clear in the story but that would be my guess, but she is barely mentioned). Going from almost finished high school to being in college might only be a few years along the way, but I would love to know the story from leaving camping on the bus up to going to college. For me its too far a step, like being told someone's story while a teen and then followed by a story about them being a senior citizen. What happened in between?

SO could have been more entertaining if it had covered more. Several dates but no details until date six and ten give a bit on the ending of those dates, and then the deed for date eleven? Sandra is drummed out but no details on the fireworks over it? No mommy coming down to rain hellfire on Sandra and the sorority president, and to thank Alex for helping her daughter? So much glossed over that could have made the story better. No details on what makes Jeannie the one Alex wants to be with, given that he espoused his philosophy in TLBS for sure.

TLBS made me want to cheer for Alex, for him to get any and/or all of the girls sharing his tent. I didn't get that with SO on Jeannie on why Alex wanted her or whether she was even worthy of Alex. This to me is the disappointment of the SO story not being as good as it could be. More detail needed in my opinion to make it better. It wasn't the Alex story so much as it was the Jeannie story with Alex in it.

Tx Tall Tales writes wonderfully! CvsN, TLBS, Sis-In-Law Incentives, Pool Payments, Two Moms-Two Laps are great longer stories, with lots of detail and great characters. All of them I've read and enjoyed. 5 stars all!! The shorter stories are good too but the longer ones are great! Would love to read more, although I do understand they are tougher to create. I'm no author, at least not yet, if ever. I've got some ideas and maybe one day I might do something but I doubt it would be as good as the stories mentioned above.

Perhaps it's only me that loves the longer stories. Continue CvsN for another 29 chapters, no complaints from me. Create an Alex tale for 29 chapters going from the bus to college and I'd relish reading them all.

Hope this is what you are asking for in terms of feedback. I truly do appreciate your writing talents and the stories you've created, even SO. I'm just greedy and wanting so much more. :)

Take care and thanks for writing so well. Hope to see more from Tx Tall Tales.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Somewhat disappointed

It's a shame because I really enjoyed the last boyscout but this is not as good.

It starts off well with the naked walk and the conversation with Heather but then falls away when Alex and Jeannie get together.

I think possibly the reason it doesn't work as well as the last boyscout is because it doesn't tell the story from Alex's POV.

Alex is a likeable character and his 4 or 5 rescuees seem more three dimensional than Jeannie.

If you do decide to continue Alex's story I would like to hear more about the summer before college and how it worked out with Miss Shannon and the girls.

Jaybee99

TossawayTossawayalmost 8 years ago
FIFTH??? 5*

I think what you meant, but didn't explain was, Jeannie remained a virgin through high school, but she did have fun, ORALLY! I think you're telling us that Alex is her 5th to give a blowjob to & her 1st for her pussy! What say you?

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleabout 8 years ago
Is she the one?

You created an equal opportunity Superman when you wrote The Last Boy Scout, and now it seems that Alex has finally found the girl he wants to settle down with. I'm shocked but also tantalized.

What now? Terminal monogamy? The white picket fence and 2.5 children? PTA? Involvement in civic affairs? Little League? Exposing corruption? Running for Congress?

I can't wait!

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