All Comments on 'Sea Views'

by Britease

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PostScriptorPostScriptorabout 15 years ago
Oh, you Brit Tease!

Cute, and well written, if perhaps a little predictable — of course it had to be the wife. But so what? It had the suspense and anticipation, and even better...we know (at least in general) what's going to happen next! LOL! I'd love to be a fly on the wall in THAT room.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
all too Predictable

since when are B cups tits Magnificent? has this author actually since a grown womans boobs in his entire life?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great

The ultimate tease! What a dirty old man. And you enjoyed every moment of it.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
To predictable

what's wrong with B cups. I've seen and fondled A thru E and haven't found one yet I didn't like. Shame on you, insulting those beautiful magnificent breasts. B cups are gorgeous. Good read author, light and a bit of humor. Enough said.

latina_beautylatina_beautyabout 15 years ago
Good but predictable

It was a good story & I read it full this time. I like your writing style. Suggestions- please continue writing good stories we need it badly.

2Xwidderwoman2Xwidderwomanabout 15 years ago
Hey - Anonymous: You smiled, didn't you?

By the time you got to "Oh good golly ...", you were smiling, weren't you? You couldn't wipe the grin off your face and you read as quickly as you could, just to find out what happened next. Brit - that was a wonderful vignette - great visualization. Do us another, please.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Interesting story as always

I liked it. As for suggestions? write what you want to write.

fregenfregenabout 15 years ago
Sweet

Ah, to have a wife that is willing to make your fantasies come true. <P>

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A such a short half life this marriage.

She plays the man until it is time to move on up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I dont fancy cows so what is called DD up is not

for me. An excellent A or B cup can be a wonderful thing. Expecially those that resemble tall volcanic cinder cones. Fantastic!

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Sweet

Lots of fun, even if the ending was screaming at us. So what does our hero have going for him? Thanks1

hansbwlhansbwlabout 15 years ago
One third through,

I had it. Nice story though

cageyteecageyteeabout 15 years ago
Well what else would an old guy like me say?

I loved it! What a delightful change from the usual LW fare these days!

bornagainbornagainabout 15 years ago
Well Done

The story was well written with hardly any errors or misspelled words.Bravo Britease.Splendid Work

Pat Atlanta,Ga

BriteaseBriteaseabout 15 years agoAuthor
Authors comment

I'm surprised at the number of comments on breast size.

So, just for the record, my preferred size is a smallish 'B' cup. If I can't have that, then I'd go for a 'A', or on the right girl even an 'AA'. Wouldn't refuse anything bigger of course (assuming I wasn't a married man that is!) but as a general rule I've always found that the smaller the breasts, then the more sensative they tend to be. ---- And I like that.

Giving is always better than taking they do say.

Britease

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
thanks!

great little story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
No surprise

No "meat" here. What I mean is, there really didn't seem to enough of a plot to support a story. It was obvious long before the end that this woman was going to turn out to be this man's own wife, that he was meeting at 4. And I've never understood why any man would think it was erotic to have his wife share her "charms" with other men in any way.

diegotoadstickerdiegotoadstickerover 10 years ago
Cute

Saw where it was going early on but it was still cute.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Men love boobies

As Za Za Gabor said: No boobies, No Rubys

Having gone from an A + a B to my magnificent DD's It's true!

I've played the beach game myself; wonder if its going to be warm enough today?

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 10 years ago
Nice

Oh Yeah. I knew it was his wife. Great little tale.

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
A FETISH ON A HONEYMOON

who would have thunk it and who in the hell would ever need it, TK U MLJ LV NV

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 9 years ago
Ok

thanks for the offering.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
As usual...

As usual another good and funny story from you...Thank you

bworth1943bworth1943over 7 years ago
fantasy guy

Excellent. Been there done that. Not exactly the same but close. Yes I do know what happened back in the room.LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Cute story. Idiots will find anything wrong with a story if they look long enough, obviously taking too much time to search for errors to write their own.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

A dangerous game, but an interesting one.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsalmost 3 years ago

To the anony of twelve yeas ago: B cups are magnificent on an appropriately skinny girl. B cups stand up and high and don’t sag so much as she gets older.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it.

Ed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

OK, but the reader is a little bit cheated by the protagonist’s claim to be a single man.

ibuguseribuguser5 months ago

Brilliant. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

A full five stars for this one. I was wondering how this would go, because he had an appointment with his wife. Delicious turn of the story. Bravo.

JPB

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