All Comments on 'Sean's Tropical Holiday Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the well timed story telling. Unfortunately, this tale needs an editor.

I like the way the story started then developed. The characters seem to be developing nicely. I agree with the previous comment in that the story would benefit from better editing. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Well-paced, with excellent characters and a great setting, this story has an atmosphere of romantic adventure about it, and fortunate readers can only hope that the author will continue what should be one of his best series yet. Five stars.

Enthusiastic consent is the sexiest thing there is... Glad this is just chapter one. If you're interested, I'd be happy to proofread/edit future chapters. PM me either here or on Fetlife. I'm _PeaceAndLove on that platform.