All Comments on 'Searching for Amarillo Pt. 01'

Jorunn, outstanding work! You have me invested in this love story btwn Texas & Amarillo. Thank you! 5*

Thank you, anonymous. Next part is in draft, and I still have many more ideas for where these two will end up.

If the sequels are as good as this part, there is much to anticipate.

Interesting how she didn't need to return to the forest? 4.5*

Fun chapter!

5

Thanks all for your comments. And for Demosthenes384bc - The cabin is still located within the forest, which is the source of the Huldras energy. I could not find anything that prohibits Huldras from entering buildings, and indeed, there are stories of Huldras (once they lose their tails) of moving into villages and living as 'humans'. In the next part, Amarillo will step outside her forest, and we will learn what happens to her when she does.

This was easier to read than part one and I enjoyed it just as much as part one.

Nicely done. Interesting story, plot, detail, dialogue, events, and adventures, but few adverse situations after the ride through the snow. Still a story hard to put down.