All Comments on 'Seaside with Two Sisters'

by SyleusSnow

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jhentaijhentaiover 2 years ago

great story! thanks!

MountainMiscellanistMountainMiscellanistover 2 years ago

Another excellent story :-)

MedicalpeteMedicalpeteover 2 years ago

Lucky, Lucky Bloke! A well told really nice story. Thank you, I really enjoyed the read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'd like to do this again someday ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very well written. I very much enjoyed the manner in which you developed the relationship and sensuality of your characters and their intimacy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No woman would ever let an unknown man wake her while eating her out without resisting. Otherwise a pretty good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Liked the story. Really doesn’t qualify as incest though. Would have loved the sisters interacting.

CaseyWoodsCaseyWoodsover 2 years ago

Hot 🔥 Yummy Sisters.!.Great Writing✍

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Thank you.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

I'm going to be really disappointed when my reading catches up with your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really like your style!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You are an amazing writer. Thanks so much.

striker24striker24over 1 year ago

This is a great story. It's amazing how you portray them making love...the intimacy, the beauty of the girls orgasms, how special making love is. Emma and Mia also seem like wonderful, special people...it's impressive you can do this in such a short story. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!

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