All Comments on 'Season of Firsts Ch. 01'

Waiting with baited breath for Chapter 2. The slow build up and what will happen when they move to the hotel is exciting.

very hot. I wish you could write faster. I loved the makeout/sex? scene between the two characters. very descriptive, you made me feel like I was there in the room with them. I can't wait for chapter two.

I believe this is the first time that I have commented here on a comment to one of my stories or poems, but I felt I should inform everyone that the entirety of the story (three chapters) has already been submitted to Literotica. There is a rule in place that only one chapter is posted per day, so Chapter 2 should be posted Monday, and Chapter 3 posted Tuesday.

This is the best of the submissions I've read so far. It is well written and you've taken your time to build the relationship's progress. Excellent, I look forward to the rest. :)

This is the best story on Lit describing the brain's role in sex. The protagonist is so well written.

That was wonderful! I’m looking forward to the next part.