All Comments on 'Seasons of the Mind Ch. 04'

Felt a bit like reading a Margaret Wise piece.

OK, I understand that she is now with child. She is married to Ben but has had 5 fantasies with a man whose name she does not know. I do hope Ch. 5 will appear soon. I need to know...

Your other commentators have their own points of view , I have mine, not many writers can leave me looking for a completion. I came to this story by way of the continuation as soon as I'd read that I left the continuation and read through this as quickly as I could to cue myself up to follow on. That I shall do as and when I am able, plus I have an observation of my own to add to this, coincidentally.

You definitely are a master storyteller Max.