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I left a note on the kitchen table for him. "Dear Jerry, Sorry it didn't work out. I've been exclusive, and I'm sorry that you weren't. I hope you and Diana have a good life together. I've taken a new position on the west coast and have removed all the things that are mine that I want. It's better this way. Goodbye, Sandra."
A couple of days after I got settled in to Portland, I got a call from Dave. "Sandy, it went... well, let me just tell you what happened. On Saturday, Jerry and Diana walked into the bedroom. She had already removed her blouse and was trying to entice Jerry to go to bed with her. The TV set suddenly turned on and they saw themselves in a live feed on the TV. There was soft romantic music playing in the background. Great touch on my part? Both were shocked and still.
"Then your pre-recorded voice came on. "I do leave you two without much anger and resentment. I'm sorry Jerry that you couldn't be trusted. I'm sure that you'll understand how that feels. I think that you want to stay till the end of these clips."
"Diana was looking very worried and tried to turn off the TV, but the remote didn't work. My low tech wonder, I put in simple piece of paper to cover the battery contact.
"The first clip showed them going at it, the next she's dissing Sandy, telling him she is all his and she can't wait until your relationship was over.
"Then he sees Diana and her boss Dan on several different days, all date and time stamped. Then it's her going at it with Jason.
"I heard another gasp from her when then a picture of Jason's wife Loretta popped up. I followed it up with a picture of Dan and his wife June and their two children under the age of 9. Jerry was frozen. Diana was frantic.
"Then your recorded voice came on again, "Yes, both of their wives have seen these scenes with Diana. In fact, both have been given live and used the feeds for this for the past weeks while I was in California.
"I've left you these videos. I do hope that you and Diana can patch things up. Oh yes, you'll need to get tested. Both of the wives have been. You are aware that there may be no symptoms right away?
"So now Jerry, do you understand about trust now?
"Take care and Good bye, Sandy"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLike an objective reporter recounting a news story of a slow-moving train wreck, the inertia of the forward motion you created with the opening of the story inevitably drove the train to hit the wall...and the shit to hit the fan. Loved the twist of the knife in the gut at the end by "the Loving Wife That Might Have Been If Only"....
Really, really loved it. Kudos and More Please.
silentsoundover 7 years agoI really enjoyed this angle from a female that is betrayed. They aren't married though so shouldn't be in LW.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoQuick and to the point . Not much of a story though, but quick and to the point i repeat Imyself.
Anonymousabout 9 years ago......I understand it may be because you want it to come off like conversation in a coffee shop...but it tends to make the reading tougher and more stilted....because it is not conversation, but narration.
That said, one of my favorite stories this month. I especially liked how she got out, and played the reversal of the BTB subgroup so well. No, she did not go agro on his ass, but her burn was mental and emotional. For Jerry, filled with fear, sadness and anger...distilling later into something more like constant, dull sorrow or regret. Life as he has known it, has ended. He'll likely have to change jobs to avoid the constant reminder of all the foolishness.
For Diana, it will be initial terror, then ,intense sadness, as she realizes how much damage her follis hen's, arrogance and perfidy have caused...then, eventually mitigated with either anger or fear, as her life changes dramatically for the worse.
For the boss and co-worker...well, let's say that for them, life will be very interesting indeed...for awhile....then they will become very dull.
Yup, fallout's a bitch ain't it?
Real good story, mostly a good read!
bruce22about 9 years agoI agree that your writing is improving and you certainly did not lose creativity with it!
bruce22about 9 years agoYou certainly are improving your writing without losing your creativity
njlaurenabout 9 years agoWTF? First of all,what century are you from,if two people agree to be monagamous and one isn't,that is cheating.As far as her being a slut,typical of Catholic morons everywhere,notice Jerry isn't a slut but Sandy is,men of course should be able to do what they want....and if you are of the no sex before marriage,virginal bride kind of person,what are you doing on lit,Aces?According to the church,reading erotica or watching things of 'prurient' interest are a sin,too,Better go off and confess your sins...
Hard to tell what the second chances are,does that mean Sandy finds someone new,or is it Jerry somehow was coerced? Kind of confusing right now.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoWow, what an improvement ! Much better writing from your previous stories .
Natural sound to the dialogue. Enough information about her that we can empathize .
A very good story. And it looks like Jerry isn't going away. I suspect that Dan and Diane are upto something, embezzlement maybe, and setting Jerry up.
Anyway, so enjoyable I gave you 4*s. Excitingly awaiting the next chapter as
AMerryMan
