- Romance
- Second Date
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All Comments on 'Second Date'
by AuburnErotica
- 3 Comments
H.H.Morantover 14 years ago</style>
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<p class=MsoNormal>I thought the writing was about as good as I’ve read on this
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<p class=MsoNormal>The pace is right.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">
</span>The characters are developed in a natural manner – we get to meet
one, and then the other, and get to know them gradually, through their actions
and conversation, rather than just be told as if we were in a PowerPoint
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<p class=MsoNormal>I especially liked the fact that we, the readers, were
invited to use our imaginations – none of the usual babble about nine
inch cocks, 36D bust lines and such.</p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Good writing – I look forward to reading other stories
you’ve posted here</p>
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AnInsatiableReaderover 14 years agoI really liked the story and hope you'll write more! A second chapter to this one perhaps?
Anonymousover 5 years agoRight off the bat Author you painted both of your main characters as extremely shallow as most young people are today. What's the mood? Get shit faced, oh how romantic from two typical of todays... losers
