All Comments on 'Second Date Rimjob'

This story was very hot! I guess it belongs to this fetish that Jack wasn't even cumming. He should have fuck both girls in the ass. I hope there will be a 2nd part in which he does so.

Loved your story: hot, funny, and thoroughly entertaining. Thanks!

my wife let's me eat her ass from time to time, but she never talks about it, during or after. I wish she would ask for it like the characters in your story, and comment about how good it feels while my tongue is up her butt. odd that chloe didn't fuck or suck him off, but I love the tease at the end and can't wait for chapter 2! great job!

amazingggg ! i love well written rimming stories and yours are the best i've found yet ! please never stop writing , you give such life to the characters and the scenes . this story was so hot i'm typing this comment one handed ! please write more . ;] xxx

My wife definitely wouldn't let me kiss her after I'd rimmed her. My girlfriend on the other hand let me rim her on the first date and then kiss her.

The talent at writing these storys is excellant. Keep up the good work. More please.

Would love to see this story continue with Jack and Jessica.

Love your writing. The spinoff with Jessica would be awesome.

I love eating my wifes ass every chance I get. If only she had a friend like Chloe to get it on camera!!

Brilliant!

That was fantastic. There's nothing better than a nice long asshole sucking and tongue fucking. You didn't miss a beat. I would have gone into more detail on the taste and scent of her tailhole though. Making it a little more funky and tangy like the real thing. 5 stars for a wonderful read.

He gets to do two in one night. What a lucky guy.

I wish you would write more about sniffing the asshole. It must be thoroughly sniffed before rimming. Once the licking begins, the wonderful aroma is gone. The smell is what drives us ass lovers wild!

SO HOT!!! I'm an ass lover myself. Such a hot story, keep it up. More like this one.

Amazing read, well written. I do agree with, there should be a bit more of sniffing the ass before the actual licking. But overall excellent story with enough detail ;p ( )•( )

Hot Damn a two-fer! I can't seem to find a satisfactory one-fer and Jack's got the coming and cumming at him from all directions. It's just not fair.

But I want to read about Jack getting his ass eaten, reciprocation fro his bawdy pleasures. It's got to happen some time.

Unfortunately I can't take a cock into my ass, its just to painful, but I love to be licked there. A guy who will do it with passion is a big plus for him in my book. And I love to reciprocate. There is something so erotic about having a man bent over on his knees with his balls hanging down. When I was young I used to feel that I was unusual for enjoying anilingus as much as I do, but I've learned its completely normal. Why would it feel so good if it wasn't?

Thanks so much Jack. I can not express my passion for womans ass like you do in words. But its so much comforting now to know some one is passionate about women's ass holes like me. The plot with truth and dare is really fitting to the story. Just awesome man. Would love to meet you in person and hangout with you if i ever can in this life.

"balloon knot", genius description, wins the trophy for originality.

To kathy251724:

Yours is the hottest comment ever!

Great writing!

Realistically getting there and delivering it all in such a short story.

No words.

Interesting premise.

Needed preliminaries before getting to the actual rimming.

Maybe some strippong naked. Then some admiring. Then some touchy-feely playing with pussy and boobs. Then some anxiety about it being lots of fun, but when are you going to tongue my ass?

Three stars.