by autoeroticrobot
The slow build up in these two chapters are amazing. Please write more!!!!!!
You should Continue the story, you left me and other craving the next chapter. -Scarlett
I really like this 2-part story and wish it would continue. I have read MANY stories on LIterotica, but I have never left a comment. Maybe that is because none of the really good ones left the story on a cliff-hanger. I would REALLY like to see how this particular tale unfolds. Damn... it is unlikely since it was the only story the author posted on LIterotica, it was posted in 2007, and it is now 2013. I can only cross my fingers for a sequel in the future. I suppose I will just have to allow my imagination to speculate how this story might turn out.
This story is great. I am very interested to hear more. I need to know where it goes from here. Keep writing.